Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely little limerick about this big pelmatogram - how did they get footprint out of that word? Great rhyming with your 'ive' words and you've certainly got the limerick flow going well.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks again for a great review :) Cheers, Craig

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I am LOL on this one, Craig. You can imagine where my mind went with this amusing poem. Image is super. Your limerick is fun and well written. Marilyn

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018

I have no idea, Marilyn! (Well, maybe just a small idea). Thanks for the fun review :) Craig

Comment from Robbie Yates

Excellent

Lovely use of rhythm in this one, Craig. Also, "Pelmatogram" wouldn't have sounded right if you'd made it the footprint of a tiny elf or small child - such a meaty word needed to be connected to a creature like the Sasquatch! Well done!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018

Thanks very much, Robbie - appreciated! :) Craig

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

You're far too clever with wordplay, Craig - getting flattened is depressive, huh? No kidding! HAhaha! Like the title, That Sinking Feeling. ROFL
Ummmmmmmmmmmmm. Now what? My heartburn is all I can think about right now. But I'm so far behind in reviewing... !!!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Hey, I hope you're feeling better soon. Feeling below par can be a bit depressive too, so plenty of rest and whatever it takes to get rid of that heartburn - doctor's orders! Thanks for the lovely review :)

reply by Dawn Munro on 23-Jul-2018

Thanks, Craig. The odd thing is this stomach issue is one I've had for several years, yet when I was younger I used to eat anything I wanted. :( I blame years of diet Coke. I still can't leave it alone completely. LOL.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Super limerick, Craig! I felt the meter was perfectly done with even such a long word pelmatogram.
It's said we have them in Northwestern US in the woods near Canada. We'll look out for them.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

I hope you'll post the pics of your get-together online for us all to see, Helen. Many thanks, Craig

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

Hey, Craig...

Entertaining limerick with a extra pleasing, rhyme, flow and beat. Well done with the theme of the day... big footprints to big feet. Oddly enough, it seems nobody is trying to avoid big foot... always trying to find him, to snap a picture, claim a sighting... though for me, I'd be just fine never to cross footpaths with the likes. He's gone through a lot of trouble to tiptoe those pelmantograms around.

Though flattened by bigfoot might be more terrifying than depressing, I enjoy the side play of being pressed into the ground... like a tongue depressor.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thanks so much, Turtle. I'm not in any hurry to find Harry, either. Leave the poor thing in peace :) I appreciate the great comments - cheers, Craig

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This limerick, Sasquatch, has the right beat and takes the footprint fererence to the granddaddy of pediatral pontoons, Big Foot. Creative use of words to make the rhyme work. Nice job with this.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thanks very much for the kind comments, Bill. Cheers - Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Well one of the components in this word sounds familiar. The togram part. It seems most civilizations have their own versions of Sasquatch like Yetis. I live in the Pacific Northwest, but Sasquatch sightings are further North. A limerick it seems. Nice alliteration. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thanks very much, Pam. We have yowies here (well, that's the story, anyway). Most grateful, Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Look out for Sasquatch! He's on the move. Although there are several names for this being, it does have a big foot--make that 2. Your picture is a great pairing with your words. Your limerick gives good info into this subject. The rhymes are IMPRESSIVE [like how I rhymed with lines 1, 2 ,& 5]? Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

But that was my line one (hehe, that was just me, being possessive). Many thanks for the great comments, Jan.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Not only have I learned a new word today, but I think that book might make an excellent present for my brother! I really like your limerick (not an easy form to master), and I must confess, I love stories about bigfoot as well. Good one!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Thanks very much, Brenda. I think it's probably the most used present I've received in a while, so I can't argue with your idea. Cheers, Craig

reply by brenda faye curtis on 26-Jul-2018

You're welcome, Craig! :)