Peace Like a River
Poem of 25 Syllables4 total reviews
Comment from karenina
As the second place finisher in this contest I want to congratulate you on a very elegant poem which even I would vote for (if only I didn't have a contender in the contest!)---This is perfect in message, expression, word choice and image...
Well deserved and an honor to be in your circle of poetry! Hurrah!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
As the second place finisher in this contest I want to congratulate you on a very elegant poem which even I would vote for (if only I didn't have a contender in the contest!)---This is perfect in message, expression, word choice and image...
Well deserved and an honor to be in your circle of poetry! Hurrah!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your positive and insightful feedback!
Comment from angel123
Your poem is peaceful and wonderful and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is excellent and it goes well with your thoughts. I also like your meaningful ending.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
Your poem is peaceful and wonderful and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is excellent and it goes well with your thoughts. I also like your meaningful ending.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about peace and states that peace is like a river where humanity is connected by bridges of love and compassion; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
This speaks about peace and states that peace is like a river where humanity is connected by bridges of love and compassion; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much!
Comment from victor 66
You have twenty-five syllables, a good rhyme and message that has continuity. It's good that you involve love and hate. They are related when you think of passion. I wish you well in the contest, Mystery Writer.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
You have twenty-five syllables, a good rhyme and message that has continuity. It's good that you involve love and hate. They are related when you think of passion. I wish you well in the contest, Mystery Writer.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
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You are welcome.