Aimin for the Heart
An adventure about a vampire hunter's foray into love22 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
I liked this . It kept me intrigued The Who,e way. I'm glad she doesn't drink..
Has to keep her wits about her..glad she met handsome..he's intriguing too.
A sequel ...well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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I liked this . It kept me intrigued The Who,e way. I'm glad she doesn't drink..
Has to keep her wits about her..glad she met handsome..he's intriguing too.
A sequel ...well penned
God bless
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your rating and stunning review.
Comment from royowen
I like this story, I like the written versions of these, I've watched a of the "Blade" movies, but this is a female hunter. I thought the character(s) in this were well described, the imagery great, I got a mental image of the scenery, and co. But in my mind, I thought the protagonist was male, but female is a good, no reason why not. Well done, I enjoyed it. Blessjngs, Roy
Typo : "I must now move swiftly....written twice.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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I like this story, I like the written versions of these, I've watched a of the "Blade" movies, but this is a female hunter. I thought the character(s) in this were well described, the imagery great, I got a mental image of the scenery, and co. But in my mind, I thought the protagonist was male, but female is a good, no reason why not. Well done, I enjoyed it. Blessjngs, Roy
Typo : "I must now move swiftly....written twice.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your generous rating and review.
Comment from Michael Steinert
This read was a pleasure. My interest was peaked by the uncult and I'm glad I didn't pass this one up. I will now always wonder weather the man was another vampire or a love. I would love to see this as a full story!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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This read was a pleasure. My interest was peaked by the uncult and I'm glad I didn't pass this one up. I will now always wonder weather the man was another vampire or a love. I would love to see this as a full story!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful rating and review. Though I originally wrote this to be a single piece I am working on perhaps a follow up.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I liked this and I liked your voice, but I got bored half way through. It all runs together with neither head nor tail. You, have to break this up in paragraphs to make it readable. When you've done that I'll come back and read it again and revise my rating. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hi there, I liked this and I liked your voice, but I got bored half way through. It all runs together with neither head nor tail. You, have to break this up in paragraphs to make it readable. When you've done that I'll come back and read it again and revise my rating. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Sorry, didn't mean it to. Will try to get it corrected when I can.
Comment from Beck Fenton
I liked reading about Artemis and what seems to be a continuing story. You write with a unique voice that I enjoyed, once I got used to it. I'll be looking for more from you!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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I liked reading about Artemis and what seems to be a continuing story. You write with a unique voice that I enjoyed, once I got used to it. I'll be looking for more from you!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the rating and comments.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Sorry, but I can't read this. It's all bunched together. You need to separate paragraphs with double spaces, like this:
... my solid silver ring, which is a family heirloom.
I didn't like abandoning innocents...
Then we can read and review it. Just use EDIT and add the spaces.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Sorry, but I can't read this. It's all bunched together. You need to separate paragraphs with double spaces, like this:
... my solid silver ring, which is a family heirloom.
I didn't like abandoning innocents...
Then we can read and review it. Just use EDIT and add the spaces.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Yes I am planning to correct it, though it might be a little while before I accomplish this.
Comment from country ranch writer
Could he be the one she has been hunting for all this time the one who will be by her side and protect her. Being a vampire slayer she sure could need his help. The
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Could he be the one she has been hunting for all this time the one who will be by her side and protect her. Being a vampire slayer she sure could need his help. The
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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It's possible. I originally wrote it as a single story, but may continue her adventures. I am working on this.
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It would be a good one for everyone loves vampires no matter how old they get!
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Am still working on that. It may come out in a follow up idea I have. Not sure where it will lead to at this point.
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Comment from kahpot
"Those such as though know what places they know best" I did stumble on this line it did not read as smooth as the rest of this wonderful story, hope it was just me? the more I read the more I neede to keep going, very well written and I hope there is more****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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"Those such as though know what places they know best" I did stumble on this line it did not read as smooth as the rest of this wonderful story, hope it was just me? the more I read the more I neede to keep going, very well written and I hope there is more****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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There are some flaws as has been pointed out. Need to correct these. I am working on an idea for a second adventure but as yet I don't have it all figured out.
Comment from meeshu
that is a very interesting twist, a vampire hunter and killer who is active in the dating scene. i like the idea of the role being passed to the next generation. good write, FM............meeshu
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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that is a very interesting twist, a vampire hunter and killer who is active in the dating scene. i like the idea of the role being passed to the next generation. good write, FM............meeshu
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your rating and reply. Much appreciated.
Comment from Lady Jane
Just a few minor edits/suggestions:
...for uncounted generations (possibly use countless instead?)
Those such as I (though) know what places they like best (I think removing the word though would help this read smoother.
Other than these, no other edits I can see. Very intriguing write. Suspenseful and your penning is well groomed. Nicely done, fm wright.
Janelle
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Just a few minor edits/suggestions:
...for uncounted generations (possibly use countless instead?)
Those such as I (though) know what places they like best (I think removing the word though would help this read smoother.
Other than these, no other edits I can see. Very intriguing write. Suspenseful and your penning is well groomed. Nicely done, fm wright.
Janelle
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Appreciate your suggestions and your rating.
