Hey, That's No Way to Say Goodbye!
See Note: A friend of 15 years chose euthanasia over cancer53 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your notes of additional context and the background about what made you devote yourself to helping those with mental illness. I appreciated your recounting Ivan's decision and its impact on you in these rhymed quatrains and effective use of dialog. He certainly did take back his "fate," and I am sure he greatly valued your support. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your notes of additional context and the background about what made you devote yourself to helping those with mental illness. I appreciated your recounting Ivan's decision and its impact on you in these rhymed quatrains and effective use of dialog. He certainly did take back his "fate," and I am sure he greatly valued your support. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much Joan... It was a surrealistic moment in time... Euthanasia is a whole different ball game than suicide... it is prepared for. He had money so he had to make sure insurances were right for his family and his property was completely paid off for his family. It was a process and the final curtain call was attended by his family. It is something that I wasn't familiar with. Many long emotional goodbyes led up to one moment. yours, diana
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Thank you for making the distinction clear and letting me know that your friend prepared his family well. Warm regards- Joan
Comment from Lady Jane
So sad when a soul chooses to end the fight before the cancer calls them home. I understand why he chose the method he did, but it's still hard to swallow losing a loved one or friend in this way.
I can see the hurt he left behind in your writing - he's still traveling the world. Just in a healthier, less debilitating frame. Your work is well written and an easy read. No suggestions for edit or change. Thank you for sharing this personal, yet very eye-opening read.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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So sad when a soul chooses to end the fight before the cancer calls them home. I understand why he chose the method he did, but it's still hard to swallow losing a loved one or friend in this way.
I can see the hurt he left behind in your writing - he's still traveling the world. Just in a healthier, less debilitating frame. Your work is well written and an easy read. No suggestions for edit or change. Thank you for sharing this personal, yet very eye-opening read.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey JaCherie... thanks for your thoughtful and humbling review... This is a subject that is always hard to speak of especially out loud... I'm humbled and happy that you understood and responded in such a lovely way. Thanks so very much. Yours, dianaxo
Comment from kiwijenny
I'm not sure what to say
But you get a six for this my dear,..we need to deep breathe after reading this. I really am sorry for your loss. My mom begged my dad to do this for her
God bless and hugs
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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I'm not sure what to say
But you get a six for this my dear,..we need to deep breathe after reading this. I really am sorry for your loss. My mom begged my dad to do this for her
God bless and hugs
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey kiwijenny... thanks for your thoughtful and humbling review... This is a subject that is always hard to speak of especially out loud... I'm humbled and happy that you understood and responded in such a lovely way. Thanks so very much... Yours, diana
Comment from jusylee72
I love the poem in so many ways. First the message, then the quick answers that delay the reality and cover up your feelings. "MOre edamane, More rice" anything to distract what is truly happening. This is a beautifully written, reality-based, avoidance of the truth until you not avoid it anymore. Very well written.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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I love the poem in so many ways. First the message, then the quick answers that delay the reality and cover up your feelings. "MOre edamane, More rice" anything to distract what is truly happening. This is a beautifully written, reality-based, avoidance of the truth until you not avoid it anymore. Very well written.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey Jusylee...Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough stellar/plus-one review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from Ulla
Hi there,what can I say. This is a very poignant poem that has left a deep impression. I truly believe it's anybodies prerogative to chose over ones own life. I can see what the impact must have been though. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hi there,what can I say. This is a very poignant poem that has left a deep impression. I truly believe it's anybodies prerogative to chose over ones own life. I can see what the impact must have been though. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey Ulla... Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from friartuck
Yet another tear from reading work on these pages. This is shattering, yet beautiful. You have touched on a subject that is taboo in many circles, yet is a necessary one to keep in active discussion. I am not a proponent of euthanasia. But. Too many suffer. Period. And I can empathize with them. Thank you for sharing this one.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Yet another tear from reading work on these pages. This is shattering, yet beautiful. You have touched on a subject that is taboo in many circles, yet is a necessary one to keep in active discussion. I am not a proponent of euthanasia. But. Too many suffer. Period. And I can empathize with them. Thank you for sharing this one.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey friartuck... It is taboo... but, in life it is true...Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words were sad, heart felt, creative
and extremely thought provoking. The reader pondered on the
words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Excellent Poem! The author's words were sad, heart felt, creative
and extremely thought provoking. The reader pondered on the
words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey harmony13... Your review is so thoughtful, thorough and you just left me speechless with your stellar/plus-one review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from Insignificant Weed
We all have choices and some are harder to make than others. The emotion expressed in this poem is truly a five star rating. This rating is also expressed in the flow of the verses, lines, and plot. Although the other decides to end his/her life, we are left with the emptiness of their being around us. We do our best to understand where they are coming from and need to grant him/her the freedom they need to make that choice. Thank you for sharing. These stories/poems help one relate to the needs of every human person, including the mentally ill.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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We all have choices and some are harder to make than others. The emotion expressed in this poem is truly a five star rating. This rating is also expressed in the flow of the verses, lines, and plot. Although the other decides to end his/her life, we are left with the emptiness of their being around us. We do our best to understand where they are coming from and need to grant him/her the freedom they need to make that choice. Thank you for sharing. These stories/poems help one relate to the needs of every human person, including the mentally ill.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey Insignificant Weed... Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, while a sad commentary in verse regarding a personal loss of a beloved friend, it belies tragedy in the acceptance of one's mortality, its choice and right to manipulate consequence. I found the distinctive rhythm and rhyme an easy and mesmerizing read...Eve
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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In my opinion, while a sad commentary in verse regarding a personal loss of a beloved friend, it belies tragedy in the acceptance of one's mortality, its choice and right to manipulate consequence. I found the distinctive rhythm and rhyme an easy and mesmerizing read...Eve
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hey eversayshi... Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
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As always, regarding your remarkable writing, you are very welcome, Diana...Eve
Comment from donette1914
Wow what a heartfelt breaking poem. you are so talented and wow this was such a sad poem and this was amazing!!!! It was a pleasure to read your well penned work donette1914 July 2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Wow what a heartfelt breaking poem. you are so talented and wow this was such a sad poem and this was amazing!!!! It was a pleasure to read your well penned work donette1914 July 2018
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much for such a thoughtful, thorough review and you just left me speechless with your stellar review. thanks so much and I'm humbled. Yours, diana
