Comment from Xia Thornwood

Exceptional

This left a pleasant thrill with me. I like your descriptions. The words you used, and the way you used them, together with the picture...I can't describe it very well. There was one line where you simply repeated yourself to make it loop poetry, but I still had to give the six stars because of the feelings you inspired.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks so much Xia. I really appreciate your review and comments! I was imagining the call of the loon at dawn.

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Very nice loop poem! Mysterious atmosphere created by well-done imagery and subtle rhyming. Love that loon ending!

Good luck in the contest.

Don (Ogden)

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

reply by Ogden on 21-Jun-2018

You're very welcome.
Don

Comment from Nanny 6

Exceptional

Awesome loop poem, your mist created by lake and mountain set the stage of morning nature. I could actually hear the echo of the lion's cry! You got my vote!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks so much. I really appreciate your comments and stars.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Beautifully done Loop poem, with haunting images and wonderfully descriptive. Your loops flow easily from line to line. Good luck in the contest,
cheers.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks so much.

Comment from Craigitar

Excellent

I've never written a loop poem, but this seems like a fine one. Your words are well chosen and delivered. Fantastic imagery throughout. Great accompanying artwork that enhances and compliments your poem. Really a nicely done piece that I suspect will do very well in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thank you so much for the great review.

Comment from meeshu

Exceptional

I am giving the highest rank because I believe this poem is everything a loop poem should be. beautiful imagery and technically sound with such an even flow in the loop words. a very nice piece..

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thank you so much. I?m honored by your comments and stars.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a very well-written poem. Great word choice paints a vivid image in the reader's mind. It has a nice steady flow and written within the guidelines. The picture is perfect for your poem. Good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks so much.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written loop poem about the mysteriuous mist on the lake, it seems calm and silent while hanging there with the mountain in the distance and the blue shade of the mist.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks so much Sandra.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is a beautiful lune poem. I like the wording, the rhyme scheme, the flow, everything! This was well thought out and I like how well you've presented it and brought it forth. I love the beautiful artwork that just adds a bit more beauty to this well written poem. I enjoyed reading this and can imagine being in this place you've described. Very well done. You should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks so much. I appreciate your time and great comments.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Yes, great job on this loop poem, Blue dawns mist. has a good meter with great rhyming. I wish you the best on the contest, And have yourself a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it.