Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow--yes, quite embarrassing especially at age eighteen! Your use of the Loop form added to the intensity of the description of the experience. I hope all your "parts" were found to be in working order! Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018

Thank you so much Joan for your great review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Jen, with this loop poem. Good use of the ending/beginning words that seem natural. There is great flow to your lines, too. Shame on that doctor for not telling you beforehand or even asking your permission to allow the students in the room. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks Jan. They didn't ask permission for anything in those days it was 1960.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

well they are going to be doctors, right? no, I imagine that was embarrassing, Jenin. a very nice touch writing a Loop for this contest.........meeshu

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Many thanks meeshu.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an embarrassing memory to relive, Woe to be a Woman sometimes, I am a bit embarrassed to say I got quite a smile out of this wonderful Loop, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks for your great review.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 'Embarrassing Loop Contest Entree rich in Theme and Imagery.
It flowed well read well with no grammar issues as well .
Adjective and Objective were both excellent and Descriptive Measures were firmly in place.
Thanks for this and good luck in the contest.
Dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Many thanks.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

In so many ways I think I'd rather be a man, childbirth is similar to what you experienced that day, a few day ago. A great entry in this loop poetry embarrassing moments contest, beautifully written, a very worthy, articulate entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks Roy for your great review. Much appreciated.

reply by royowen on 19-Jun-2018

Well done Jen

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written loop poem and a very embarrassing moment to be exposed before so many male students and there is nothing you could do to prevent or predict the situation.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Jen. Men just do not understand, do they? Lol. I suppose they think a rectal is equivalent. We get rectals every time too. This is a good entry for the contest. I always get nervous whenever I hear that door open. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks a lot for the review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Old Soldier

Excellent

I guess you where. Don't they ask if it's okay for students to observe? Nice poem good luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

They didn't ask in those days. It was 1960. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, you poor thing. Good loop poem for the contest and best of luck with this entry. It must have been so embarrassing. If it was during labor you probably wouldn't have cared, but just for your check-up, not want you're wanting ... LOL, It is kind of funny though, so it's good you've put it into verse. I think the picture is great, too, suits it so well. I have no suggestions for improvement and enjoyed reading your poem, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Many thanks, much appreciated.