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Why are they forsaken?

A Shadorma

5 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Thank you for calling us to task about a problem that should never had begun in America and can be quickly remedied, if we simply have the will to be humane. Your use of the Shadorma form and the questions is very effective. More sighs- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Joan my friend, I appreciate your insights and the kind review and all the wonderful stars; thank you very much.
Comment from Pamusart
Excellent
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Devoid of decency. Detained and deported. Most of those kids will never see their parents again. And it is deliberate. Here, Italy, Austria, Germany are forming the Fourth Reich. Will we never learn. All of these countries looking on immigrants as vermin. Trying to make everyone else think that as well. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Pam my friend, I am grateful to you for your insights and the kind comments; thank you very much.
Comment from jenintorre
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A very true and powerful message you!ve written here, Ameen in just six lines. Where will it all end. You have chosen a great and fitting illustration. Well done. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Jenin my friend, I appreciate your visit and the kind comments; thank you very much.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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Excellent, I would have liked to see moms, kids with capitals, this is a very expressional poem, with great artwork to enhance these wonderful yet sad words, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    My friend, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Hey Kamran the new policy by the current administration to separate children from their parents is beyond heartbreaking. Homeland Security is even deporting parents and leaving children in the US with no way to get in touch with their children.

So inhumane and to do so under the guise of Christianity makes it that much more evil.

Excellent social commentary.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Gloria my friend, I appreciate the stop and the insights; thank you very much.