Wild Tornado
An intense, violent Twister.15 total reviews
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Good fortune on this poem that is written in Nonet style as it informs us about the destruction & devastation of the force of tornadoes. The picture of this tornado is unique in its descriptive upside down gyroscopic top. giovanni
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Good fortune on this poem that is written in Nonet style as it informs us about the destruction & devastation of the force of tornadoes. The picture of this tornado is unique in its descriptive upside down gyroscopic top. giovanni
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much!z
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y/w giovanni
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent piece. I'm not familiar with the nonet structure, I assume it has to do with a decreasing syllable count. Yes, I did count them, LOL. The poem itself really brings the feeling of being in and around a tornado. I actually was chilled when I read the poem. Perfect picture to go with the poem. Very good work.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Excellent piece. I'm not familiar with the nonet structure, I assume it has to do with a decreasing syllable count. Yes, I did count them, LOL. The poem itself really brings the feeling of being in and around a tornado. I actually was chilled when I read the poem. Perfect picture to go with the poem. Very good work.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much. Yes, you have it right, a Nonet is a descending syllable count poem. They are fun to do, something like a puzzle. Give it a try!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like how you centered your poem & how the lines form the shape of a tornado. Even if no picture had been included, you painted one. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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You did a great job with your nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like how you centered your poem & how the lines form the shape of a tornado. Even if no picture had been included, you painted one. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thank you Jan! I like the challenge of syllables.
Comment from kiwijenny
I applaud your choice of nonet because it's shaped like a tornado. Churning twisting wind...
So scary good. The photo is amazing.
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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I applaud your choice of nonet because it's shaped like a tornado. Churning twisting wind...
So scary good. The photo is amazing.
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much! Appreciated.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
A nicely done nonet poem you've penned for the contest. Nice rhyming. I enjoy a good storm story. lol good luck ! -Kerry
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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A nicely done nonet poem you've penned for the contest. Nice rhyming. I enjoy a good storm story. lol good luck ! -Kerry
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much Kerry!
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Very welcome:)
