Leap for joy.
A free verse.19 total reviews
Comment from aanneee
Love the entire presentation here, picture, color, and your verses, they made for a very nice read and I thank you very much for that. I find it quite hard sometimes coming up with 150 characters but this should do it. Very nicely done indeed - Dinah
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Love the entire presentation here, picture, color, and your verses, they made for a very nice read and I thank you very much for that. I find it quite hard sometimes coming up with 150 characters but this should do it. Very nicely done indeed - Dinah
Comment Written 29-May-2018
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for sharing your hopeful free verse with us, along with VMarguarite's joyful artwork. Here's to your continuing to sing and leap! Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Thanks for sharing your hopeful free verse with us, along with VMarguarite's joyful artwork. Here's to your continuing to sing and leap! Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 29-May-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
This is great fun. I have heared of bouncing Czechs but not leapping lowlanders before.
Although poetry does not always follow English grammar as closely as prose does this sort of thing does need sorting:
"all problems will solve by itself."
The subject is plural, 'all problems', so the rest must agree and 'itself' is a singular form. This could be written 'each problem will be solved by itself'.
or perhaps better as 'all problems will solve themselves'.
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This is great fun. I have heared of bouncing Czechs but not leapping lowlanders before.
Although poetry does not always follow English grammar as closely as prose does this sort of thing does need sorting:
"all problems will solve by itself."
The subject is plural, 'all problems', so the rest must agree and 'itself' is a singular form. This could be written 'each problem will be solved by itself'.
or perhaps better as 'all problems will solve themselves'.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
Comment from c_lucas
Jumping for Joy has a whole new meaning. This is a very enthusiastic poem. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a very good read. Good job.
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Jumping for Joy has a whole new meaning. This is a very enthusiastic poem. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a very good read. Good job.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
Comment from closetpoetjester
I think when we face up to our problems as opposed to run from them or curl up in a tiny balli n the corner...then that is when we find our true strength and see clearly. We then recognise what we need to do and work towards that.
With that said, sometimes it IS nice to curl up in a ball and just let the world revolve around us haha
A lovely inspirational poem Ine and I have a special sixer coming your way. Beautifully written! Lots of emotion.
Hugs P
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I think when we face up to our problems as opposed to run from them or curl up in a tiny balli n the corner...then that is when we find our true strength and see clearly. We then recognise what we need to do and work towards that.
With that said, sometimes it IS nice to curl up in a ball and just let the world revolve around us haha
A lovely inspirational poem Ine and I have a special sixer coming your way. Beautifully written! Lots of emotion.
Hugs P
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Comment Written 28-May-2018
Comment from Swampfox1
Lord, I can say it is free verse, free as the birds. LOL. When you ask for sixes in the poem itself that is not what makes a good poem. And, to me , it guarantees not getting a six. Sorry for that but I feel that the humorous line you put in pretty much ruined the poem in the way it went from one subject then going to humor and stuff that did not belong in the poem. To me, as a serious poet, I find that what you did is what a person does when joking around and being silly and not really meaning to write a poem.
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Lord, I can say it is free verse, free as the birds. LOL. When you ask for sixes in the poem itself that is not what makes a good poem. And, to me , it guarantees not getting a six. Sorry for that but I feel that the humorous line you put in pretty much ruined the poem in the way it went from one subject then going to humor and stuff that did not belong in the poem. To me, as a serious poet, I find that what you did is what a person does when joking around and being silly and not really meaning to write a poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from misscookie
I found this to be a interesting read from the start
I Like happy writes sometimes the poems are so sad.... Thank you for sharing and stay happy[Y AND FULL OF JOY.
COOKIE
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I found this to be a interesting read from the start
I Like happy writes sometimes the poems are so sad.... Thank you for sharing and stay happy[Y AND FULL OF JOY.
COOKIE
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from ameen786
Hello Robina and thank you for sharing this wonderful and upbeat poem with vibrant verses and great flow; we must always be positive in life, great message.
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Hello Robina and thank you for sharing this wonderful and upbeat poem with vibrant verses and great flow; we must always be positive in life, great message.
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from meeshu
what an excellent free verse, free thought piece about the boundless wonders of just being alive! very well written with a great message, Robina........meeshu
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what an excellent free verse, free thought piece about the boundless wonders of just being alive! very well written with a great message, Robina........meeshu
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Robina, :)
Okay, I'll give you a six cause this is a very happy poem. I hope you stay happy and smiling with jumping around!
Have a great week.
Nome
Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, Robina, :)
Okay, I'll give you a six cause this is a very happy poem. I hope you stay happy and smiling with jumping around!
Have a great week.
Nome
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2018
