A son's dream
The day I was born45 total reviews
Comment from Lainee...
A lovely way to tell your story and show your love for your Mother. Your end rhyming words were good yet I found the flow of thoughts to be disrupted. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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A lovely way to tell your story and show your love for your Mother. Your end rhyming words were good yet I found the flow of thoughts to be disrupted. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from gloriazen
That was really good in fact excellant. So gracious for her son to say the words he felt! You deserve an award for just writing that for your mother! Great write! Gloriazen
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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That was really good in fact excellant. So gracious for her son to say the words he felt! You deserve an award for just writing that for your mother! Great write! Gloriazen
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thank you gloriazen for this most exceptional six star rating my friend. My mother is one of a kind and loved by so many.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Ulla
Awe, isn't this just lovely. Your poem is an unconditional declaration of love to your Mum. She must be so happy when she reads your beautiful poem. I like it a lot and enjoyed the reading. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Awe, isn't this just lovely. Your poem is an unconditional declaration of love to your Mum. She must be so happy when she reads your beautiful poem. I like it a lot and enjoyed the reading. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thank you Ulla for this uplifting, excellent review my friend. I do love her so.
God bless
steve
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely tribute to the woman who has loved and nurtured you for half a century! Yet it must feel just like yesterday when she carried you in her loving arms. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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What a lovely tribute to the woman who has loved and nurtured you for half a century! Yet it must feel just like yesterday when she carried you in her loving arms. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thank you June, I do love my mom.
God bless
steve
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Son's Dream, is a terrific Mother's Day send up from you to your mom. We can all take a piece of that sentiment and send it on to our mothers as well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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This poem, A Son's Dream, is a terrific Mother's Day send up from you to your mom. We can all take a piece of that sentiment and send it on to our mothers as well. Nice job.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thank you Bill for the excellent review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Bobby Jo
What a great gift to mothers yes, I do believe that babies do recognize our voices from the womb, when my baby girl was born, she was crying, as soon as I said her name, she stopped and focused on me. What an amazing story.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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What a great gift to mothers yes, I do believe that babies do recognize our voices from the womb, when my baby girl was born, she was crying, as soon as I said her name, she stopped and focused on me. What an amazing story.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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I believe this as well Bobby jo. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from tfawcus
The moment of birth must be one of every mother's most cherished moments and this poem that records it in the form of a dream makes a perfect Mothers' Day gift, sealing the intimate connection between mother and son. A fine poem.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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The moment of birth must be one of every mother's most cherished moments and this poem that records it in the form of a dream makes a perfect Mothers' Day gift, sealing the intimate connection between mother and son. A fine poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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I agree Tony, Thank you for this most exceptional review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a most original poem and a great tribute to your mum. I love the description of your birth.
The only thing I'm not sure about is the use of the verb to reply in the fifth line as nobody has asked him a question.
Thanks so much for this lovely post.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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This is a most original poem and a great tribute to your mum. I love the description of your birth.
The only thing I'm not sure about is the use of the verb to reply in the fifth line as nobody has asked him a question.
Thanks so much for this lovely post.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Maria, Thank you soooo much for this beautiful, exceptional review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent tribute to your mother. You should frame it and give it to her on Mother's Day. She would treasure it forever. We can never tell our mothers enough what they mean to us.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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This is an excellent tribute to your mother. You should frame it and give it to her on Mother's Day. She would treasure it forever. We can never tell our mothers enough what they mean to us.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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That is an amazing Idea Thomas, thank you for that. Thank you for this most excellent review as well.
God bless
Steve
Comment from victor 66
I was born in 1947. My father died when I was just fifteen. My mother was a nurse with two jobs at different hospitals. She had her kids, her work and her drinking. She made sure we had everything we needed. She died at the age of 61, a year before she was going to retire. Growing up, I was very angry about her drinking. As the years passed after her death and especially now; if I ever get a chance to see her in the afterlife, I would tell her how sorry I am. The only thing she did, was sometimes made me feel embarrassed when she drank. She did so much more for us kids than that. Thank you for the "therapy poem".
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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I was born in 1947. My father died when I was just fifteen. My mother was a nurse with two jobs at different hospitals. She had her kids, her work and her drinking. She made sure we had everything we needed. She died at the age of 61, a year before she was going to retire. Growing up, I was very angry about her drinking. As the years passed after her death and especially now; if I ever get a chance to see her in the afterlife, I would tell her how sorry I am. The only thing she did, was sometimes made me feel embarrassed when she drank. She did so much more for us kids than that. Thank you for the "therapy poem".
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Victor, as kids we don't see them as they are and sometimes as adults as well. When we reflect back is when the true beauty of it all comes into play.
Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Steve
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You are most welcome, Steve.
