A poem about Jesus.
Written for the club.15 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
Nice club entry for this poem. Yes, Who is Jesus and why had he to die such a terrible dead... The Bible says to save us from our sins....that's where our religion is based on....and that's why we believe. There are no proves, we have to believe....
Fia
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
Nice club entry for this poem. Yes, Who is Jesus and why had he to die such a terrible dead... The Bible says to save us from our sins....that's where our religion is based on....and that's why we believe. There are no proves, we have to believe....
Fia
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. HJave a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Your poem is presented well, and I only have one concern. We DO know why Jesus died. Without His death, we wouldn't be able to go to Heaven.
God understood man had a sinful nature. God cannot be near sin. He had to send His only son to die and shed His blood to cover all of our sins. Through our belief in this sacrifice and the love of Jesus Christ, we can enter Heaven.
God does know quite well why He sent His only son to earth, and I hope my explanation helps you, too.
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
Hi there;
Your poem is presented well, and I only have one concern. We DO know why Jesus died. Without His death, we wouldn't be able to go to Heaven.
God understood man had a sinful nature. God cannot be near sin. He had to send His only son to die and shed His blood to cover all of our sins. Through our belief in this sacrifice and the love of Jesus Christ, we can enter Heaven.
God does know quite well why He sent His only son to earth, and I hope my explanation helps you, too.
~patty~
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed weekend.
Comment from HaleyBel
A simple poem about Jesus. I enjoyed the cinquain. It doesn't have a lot of imagery but poses a good question. He 'to me' died to save us. Good luck with your entry.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2018
A simple poem about Jesus. I enjoyed the cinquain. It doesn't have a lot of imagery but poses a good question. He 'to me' died to save us. Good luck with your entry.
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Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.
Comment from meeshu
this is a nice little prayer that would fit in nicely for any service. well stated with a bit of mystery to it. a fine devotional poem, Robina........meeshu
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
this is a nice little prayer that would fit in nicely for any service. well stated with a bit of mystery to it. a fine devotional poem, Robina........meeshu
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good weekend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry completely confuses me. It makes absolutely no sense at all. I understand that Jesus died for us but the rest makes no sense. Good luck
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
This contest entry completely confuses me. It makes absolutely no sense at all. I understand that Jesus died for us but the rest makes no sense. Good luck
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed second part of the week.
Comment from Rasmine
Robina,
This is a good poem for the club assignment. I like it.
Please, keep on writing. I congratulate you on holding #10! That is really good. :)
Have a pleasant day.
Nome
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Robina,
This is a good poem for the club assignment. I like it.
Please, keep on writing. I congratulate you on holding #10! That is really good. :)
Have a pleasant day.
Nome
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
Your words are so few
Yet the message is loud and clear
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
Your words are so few
Yet the message is loud and clear
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
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You're very welcome Happy Mothers day
Cookie
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You're very welcome Happy Mothers day
Cookie
Comment from sunnilicious
Well stated, Ina. You thought this out and wrote it to be easily understood. Great presentation. I'm not on every day anymore... I have to work on becoming that actor. Hope you're doing well. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Well stated, Ina. You thought this out and wrote it to be easily understood. Great presentation. I'm not on every day anymore... I have to work on becoming that actor. Hope you're doing well. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week. Thanks for the lovely six.
Comment from Ann Tran
Thank you Robina. Yes God's infinite wisdom is ungraspable. I like your sandwich effect for your haiku, having us between Jesus and God. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Thank you Robina. Yes God's infinite wisdom is ungraspable. I like your sandwich effect for your haiku, having us between Jesus and God. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
We can never go wrong in sharing our love of Jesus. I attended a church as a little girl and we had a photo with the caption, "Jesus died for you; why not live for him." Your poem brought that memory back to me. Such a blessing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
We can never go wrong in sharing our love of Jesus. I attended a church as a little girl and we had a photo with the caption, "Jesus died for you; why not live for him." Your poem brought that memory back to me. Such a blessing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.