Matter of faith
a contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Ava Wilson
Great message in such a short poem. I love that you compared faith to a bird flying. I enjoyed reading this and wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Great message in such a short poem. I love that you compared faith to a bird flying. I enjoyed reading this and wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Hello Ava, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the write; thank you very much.
Comment from Air Spirit
Exceptional poem.. in delivery and message.. the message is so powerful, and so much is packed into so few words. You have done a great job with the few words you were allowed to write the poem.. I love the 'wanna fly'? You are so right, in that faith helps us achieve things that would have or could have easily been thought of as miracles.. but they are made possible from the faith we carry with us to great the challenge.. delightful share..
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Exceptional poem.. in delivery and message.. the message is so powerful, and so much is packed into so few words. You have done a great job with the few words you were allowed to write the poem.. I love the 'wanna fly'? You are so right, in that faith helps us achieve things that would have or could have easily been thought of as miracles.. but they are made possible from the faith we carry with us to great the challenge.. delightful share..
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Hello again, my friend and I am grateful to you for your visit and the wonderful review, so glad you like the write; thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 when we still have faith everything around us seem beautiful and alive. When the birds stop flying and the bees stop buzzing then we are in trouble and should make sure we still believe.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 when we still have faith everything around us seem beautiful and alive. When the birds stop flying and the bees stop buzzing then we are in trouble and should make sure we still believe.
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Hello Sandra, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful insights; thank you very much.
Comment from poetwatch
We are birds of a feather. We fly the heavens on the wings of angels for the Father is with us and the Son smiles at our love. I believe. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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We are birds of a feather. We fly the heavens on the wings of angels for the Father is with us and the Son smiles at our love. I believe. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. You have my vote.
Comment Written 08-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Hello again my friend and I thank you for the kind review, God bless.
Comment from Artasylum
So much said in such a succinct 5-7-5. The biggest thing we all need to do is believe. Faith in ourselves can move mountains. Looking forward. Thanks so much yours, diana
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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So much said in such a succinct 5-7-5. The biggest thing we all need to do is believe. Faith in ourselves can move mountains. Looking forward. Thanks so much yours, diana
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Hello Diana, very kind of you to visit; I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write; I thank you my friend.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello poet of this contest
When I saw this contest I had no idea what to say
I like how you described faith is the best way to see light through the darkness of our lives
an Excellent 5-7-5.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Hello poet of this contest
When I saw this contest I had no idea what to say
I like how you described faith is the best way to see light through the darkness of our lives
an Excellent 5-7-5.
Gert
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Hello Gert, I am pleased to read your wonderful and encouraging comments; thank you my friend.
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You are welcome ameen
Gert
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a great message to embed into your 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt, bye bye blackbird. This is a solid entry for this particular contest. I wish you lots of luck.
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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What a great message to embed into your 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt, bye bye blackbird. This is a solid entry for this particular contest. I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Cindy my friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your time and the wonderful/encouraging review; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your short verse about having faith in flying is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your short verse about having faith in flying is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Hi Sharon, I am glad that you like the write; I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
Comment from kathleenspalding
I believe I can fly ... in an airplane, LOL! Thoughtful and cute five - seven - five has great artwork and message. I see no errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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I believe I can fly ... in an airplane, LOL! Thoughtful and cute five - seven - five has great artwork and message. I see no errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Hello Kathleen, I appreciate your stop and am pleased to ready your witty comment; thank you very much for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from victor 66
I can offer no suggestions that would make this five - seven - five better. You have followed the prompt guidelines and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. Take care.
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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I can offer no suggestions that would make this five - seven - five better. You have followed the prompt guidelines and I wish you the best of luck in this contest. Take care.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Hello Victor, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
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You are most welcome, Ameen.
