Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Barbara;
This should be a rather interesting conversation. Not too many people take the time to understand what the Jewish faith believes. They just pass off the knowledge that Jews do not believe in Christ. However, their religion is so much more than that.

I look forward to your explanation,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

It sure is and devout Jews live their religion. Thank you for the understanding review.

Comment from Blue Hendrix

Excellent

Wonderful story. I enjoyed the characters very much.the story moves along easily with a easy flow that I really enjoyed. Great story line as well. Hope to read more of your work soon.

 Comment Written 09-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Barbara, :)

Good chapter. I bet they get together at the end. :P
What are migas? I guess its a type of food, okay it's explained a bit in your author's notes. Well, they look good. Have you ever had them?

Take care,
Nome

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Yes, I have eaten them and they are good. In Texas, we eat a lot of Mexican, Puerto Rican, and a mixture called Tex Mex. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

So, Shana and Drew are still in that phase of getting to know each other with both their respective families of course. They are not in a relationship yet, but it will surely end up there. Thanks for this heartwarming chapter.

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

This is a good read Barbara.
I'm coming into this write right now and will try to dig backwards. Your chapter has great character development. The background of eating is a good way to build. thanks for the read yours, diana

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

We never know what anyone is going to say next, and that sometimes even includes ourselves. Of course, if we don't speak up and ask questions, how are we ever going to find the answers. LOL! Thanks for another fine chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Good one Barb. I see nothing wrong. Seems as Shana is settling ib if Dad don't scare her off with questions. We have two x Jarheads and Shanna has a scratch. Like the mother cooking real food. LOL.

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from rtobaygo

Exceptional

Good morning, Barbara

Enjoyed the continuation. Found the dialogue and interaction between your characters to be spot on. The flow had a natural ease to it and I liked Anderson's reaction to his father's observation pertaining to Jewish beliefs and that he knew Jewish individuals exist. Well done.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

False alarm? Nice seguing into the family way and the similarities between the families. Also some nice backstory dropped in for good measure for Anderson.

Anderson took a handkerchief from his pocket and wiped the blood "This - needs punctuation after blood.

She place the cloth on her lap. - placed.

"This one has chorizo in it and the other doesn't" - need end punctuation before the closing speech marks here.

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 12-May-2018

I'm sorry for the late reply. I needed time to correct the mistakes so I wouldn't make additional ones. I can't believe others didn't pick those up. I can't believe I didn't catch them when I edited. They were simple ones. Oh my!! Thank you.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Barbara, I love the ending of this chapter, and especially when Michael asks;
"Shana, I know Jewish people exist, but I don't think I ever met one. Exactly what do they believe?"
It's priceless. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you for the kind review.