haiku (sunshine soaked dewdrops)
a contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Sunshine Soaked Dewdrops, follows the bridge of colors all the way down to the standing drop which reflects the same promise as is stretched across the sky.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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This haiku, Sunshine Soaked Dewdrops, follows the bridge of colors all the way down to the standing drop which reflects the same promise as is stretched across the sky.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Bill my friend, I appreciate the stop and the insights; thank you sir.
Comment from angel123
Your Rainbow poem is descriptive and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it and it flows with the good use of s, and t letters and sounds. Your artwork choice is beautiful. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Your Rainbow poem is descriptive and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it and it flows with the good use of s, and t letters and sounds. Your artwork choice is beautiful. Best wishes!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Hello again my friend, I am grateful to you for your visit and the kind, generous review; thank you very much.
Comment from MissMerri
What a lovely haiku this is! You have taken a very unique approach to the rainbow. It is clever and most interesting. I like it and feel pretty sure most voters will also. Great idea!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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What a lovely haiku this is! You have taken a very unique approach to the rainbow. It is clever and most interesting. I like it and feel pretty sure most voters will also. Great idea!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hello Miss Merri and thank you very much for the wonderful review; I appreciate it very much; have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ameen, I like the photo you have chosen to accompany this reflective haiku. Very pretty pearls of joy for sure. The end line question certainly allows the reader to sit and think for a moment. Great job! ~DD
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Ameen, I like the photo you have chosen to accompany this reflective haiku. Very pretty pearls of joy for sure. The end line question certainly allows the reader to sit and think for a moment. Great job! ~DD
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello DD, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful thoughtful comments; thank you very much.
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It was my pleasure : -) ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
Raindrops or dewdrops or teardrops...clearly beautiful. I love the way the morning sun sparkles on spiderwebs. This is a wonderful 'rainbow' entry!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Raindrops or dewdrops or teardrops...clearly beautiful. I love the way the morning sun sparkles on spiderwebs. This is a wonderful 'rainbow' entry!
Blessings...
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased to read your wonderful/thoughtful comments; thank you very much.
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You're most welcome!!
Comment from ScarletAffliction
You made this haiku seem like hard work to write. The words were carefully chosen and images carefully created while still adhering to the strict and conforming scheme. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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You made this haiku seem like hard work to write. The words were carefully chosen and images carefully created while still adhering to the strict and conforming scheme. Nicely done!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased that you like the haiku, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Great job on this haiku. I really enjoyed this work. Since hard to fit in imagery and flow in such a short poem.but you managed to do it. Congrats and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Great job on this haiku. I really enjoyed this work. Since hard to fit in imagery and flow in such a short poem.but you managed to do it. Congrats and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the A Rainbow writing prompt.
Your Haiku tells of dewdrops that may actually be tear drops.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the A Rainbow writing prompt.
Your Haiku tells of dewdrops that may actually be tear drops.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello Sharon, my friend, I appreciate your stop and am pleased that you like the poem; thank you very much.
Comment from Pamusart
I like. The first line/title. This is a good entry for the contest. Who does not love rainbows? I do not know anyone who does not like them. This is a good entry for the contest. Good luck with it. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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I like. The first line/title. This is a good entry for the contest. Who does not love rainbows? I do not know anyone who does not like them. This is a good entry for the contest. Good luck with it. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello Pam, my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
The artwork is very colorful blue. And everybody knows that after the rain comes the sun to soak it up and comes the beautiful rainbow with its beautuful array of colors.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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The artwork is very colorful blue. And everybody knows that after the rain comes the sun to soak it up and comes the beautiful rainbow with its beautuful array of colors.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Hello Mary, very kind of you to visit; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
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My pleasure
