Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Interesting Bible story your poem is written around Craig. I guess today we could compare it to one of David Attenborough's shows, where we too see what most of us will not get to visit. Like your finishing line, that would be good.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Yes, poor Moses - the word "harsh" comes to mind. Wouldn't it be great to see some of the things Mr Attenborough has? Cheers, Craig

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

a compassionate world. I do believe that is Pisgah.
What I wish there was more of is respect, civility, manners, honor. Are those unattainable, too? In a country where the vocal demand that God be removed from our country's buildings, from schools, from prayer, and college students degrade and injure those who disagree with their political opinions while administrators do nothing--kids don't learn about compassion. And what about fair play? and hey, what about parenting? Responsibility?
sorry. I got caught up in this. But I do believe if we could get back to good old fashioned values, there is hope for us.
pome lover

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

I think the most vocal about all of the above are those who least practice them. Respect, civility, manners, and honor are the antithesis of what you see in the highest office in the land, and those who claim to value them are the first ones to jump to the defence of one who shows exactly the opposite of all those attributes. Not to mention humility and compassion. Funny old world, isn't it? I'm all for all of those things, which have nothing to do with religion :) Many thanks, Craig

reply by pome lover on 19-Apr-2018

Craig, I respectfully disagree. I hope, however, we can still have friendly reviews of each other's work.
Katharine

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

I hope so, Katharine. If we could only interact nicely with those who shared our opinion on every single thing, it would be a small world.

reply by pome lover on 19-Apr-2018

well, my brother, in California and I are on opposite sides of the political spectrum, but he and I don't discuss politics and I love him dearly. We talk about other things - in fact he's coming to see me - first time in 22 years!

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Well, again I am wishing I had a six, but then that's just one more in a series of wishes that will never be granted... (lol)

Fabulous, Craig (and disturbing - I am 'in a bad place' right now). Poor Moses...

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

I agree, Dawn - poor Moses! Thanks for the lovely review, don't feel bad about the lack of a six, I'm out too - it's going to be a long wait until Monday. Much appreciated :) Craig

Comment from Dorinda Palmisano

Exceptional

A wonderful entry in the ABC format, along with another new word (for me) of Pisgah. The bible quote was equaling informative and was a good background for your poem. Good luck. Dorinda

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the lovely comments, the exceptional rating, and the good wishes, Dorinda. All are very gratefully received. Have a great day! Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Craig, I am surprised by this post from you. I thought you did not believe in religion. Posh ah to you. But, I am in shock. Really. You are not born again, are you? Lol. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

LOL No Pam, I've only been born once ;-)

The word itself comes from the story of Moses, so it makes sense to relate that story in the poem. The point is "so near, and yet so far", and this story seems the best example of that. It doesn't mean I think it's a great story (I definitely don't like some of the implications - poor Moses!)

Sorry for the confusion LOL

Cheers, Craig

reply by Pamusart on 18-Apr-2018

I was only joking, Craig. Gotcha! Tag, you?re it

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

LOL

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your ABC poetry entry is a good one. I think I have a lot of Pisgahs. Probably everyone does. Your poem is well rhymed and on a biblical topic which sort of surprised me. Still, we are many-faceted people. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Hi Marilyn, The word is derived from that story, so it was kind of natural to use the story as an example. That doesn't necessarily mean I believe the story really transpired. And if it had, I don't think it says particularly nice things. But as an example of what the word describes, - a goal which is beyond reach - it seems to fit :) Many thanks, Craig

reply by BeasPeas on 18-Apr-2018

I agree. My comment was tongue-in-cheek. :)

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

I loved your use of the new vocabulary word: Pisgah. What a lovely scene your poem brings to my mind. I too would enjoy a world with more compassion. Thank you for sharing this. I hope it leaves readers with more to ponder in their hearts.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the kind words, Cindy - much appreciated, Craig

Comment from Swampfox1

Excellent

I like your notes too. I enjoyed "He'd never walk the promised land". Moses never crossed into the promised land because instead of speaking to the rock, as instructed by God he struck the rock. He showed that he did not trust God. Then, also, instead of praising God and giving credit to God Moses took the credit. He took the credit for bringing forth the water. This is a good entry in the contest. Good luck and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks for your kind and informed comments and the good wishes. Most grateful - Craig

reply by Swampfox1 on 17-Apr-2018

you're welcome

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like the message of this. Moses got to see so much and do so much, yet, he didn't get to go into the promised land. He talked to God face to face and got to see his form. He was put in the cleft of the rock and got to see the back parts of God. When you get that close to God, there is more required of you. There is a cost to having that kind of relationship with the Lord. You've done a fine job presenting this well written poem. Well done CDRichards!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the kind and thoughtful review, Jeffrey. Most appreciated - Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Although seeming light this is a very sad poem, at least to me. "Look but don't touch, touch but don't taste, taste but don't swallow". Seems sadistic really and for what purpose.

That said, excellent ABC entry friend, Craig. I wish you the best of luck.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks very much, Gloria. Yes, if there's a lesson to be learned from this, I found a different one than many who have commented. Totally agree with you. Most appreciated - Craig