For Jane
A poem for my favourite writer.15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely poem written for Jane Austen. Great opening verse Maria, I particularly like the stories 'engraved on paper'. Her imagination took her away from heartbreak, out of her dull world and she took and still does take her readers along with her. A lovely emotional read.
cheers.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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A lovely poem written for Jane Austen. Great opening verse Maria, I particularly like the stories 'engraved on paper'. Her imagination took her away from heartbreak, out of her dull world and she took and still does take her readers along with her. A lovely emotional read.
cheers.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thanks for this review. Take care.
Comment from Irish Rain
I love all of this. 'Painting ghosts with ink'...how lovely is that? I imagine that what we think are the most boring lives, are, in reality, the most creative. She was such an inspiration, and this is a lovely tribute.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I love all of this. 'Painting ghosts with ink'...how lovely is that? I imagine that what we think are the most boring lives, are, in reality, the most creative. She was such an inspiration, and this is a lovely tribute.
Blessings...
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks for this lovely review. Take care.
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You're most welcome!
Comment from aryr
This is a great tribute to Jane Austen, who was indeed one of the famous English novelist. It addressed her many talents and abilities of penning the transformation of thoughts and acts to words on paper. Very well done Maria, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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This is a great tribute to Jane Austen, who was indeed one of the famous English novelist. It addressed her many talents and abilities of penning the transformation of thoughts and acts to words on paper. Very well done Maria, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks for reading. Take care.
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You are most welcome Marie.
Comment from royowen
I don't think people who become famous because an extraordinary talent are aware of their talent, and the effect it has on people, we all live inside our own heads. Beautifully written free verse honouring Jane Austen, I've been to Bath. Well done Maria, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I don't think people who become famous because an extraordinary talent are aware of their talent, and the effect it has on people, we all live inside our own heads. Beautifully written free verse honouring Jane Austen, I've been to Bath. Well done Maria, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I love Bath. I go there on a one-day trip every summer when I'm in England.
Thanks for reading.
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Well done Maria
Comment from BeasPeas
An enjoyable read and I love the artwork. Many times talented people have to die before they're appreciated. Maybe one day that will happen to us Maria. What do you think? Yes/no? This is a very good poem about your favorite writer. Maybe you are Jane reincarnated. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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An enjoyable read and I love the artwork. Many times talented people have to die before they're appreciated. Maybe one day that will happen to us Maria. What do you think? Yes/no? This is a very good poem about your favorite writer. Maybe you are Jane reincarnated. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Who knows? A girl can dream... :)
Thanks for your review.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Maria Jose Garcia, A lovely poem and beautiful tribute to Jane Austen. With April being National poetry month, this is a timely write. I especially liked:
Some say your life was tedious,
Colourless and dull.
But you fought the world
With your sword of wit.
(She was a legend, and she paved the road for other women writers. She was definitely ahead of the times.)
Also of important note:
If only you had known
How great you would become
When you walked heartbroken
Down the streets of Bath.
(So true, so sad.)
Lovely artwork choice, and now I'm going to read some of her poems. So much for reviewing. You may be the last of today - lol. Smiles, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hello Maria Jose Garcia, A lovely poem and beautiful tribute to Jane Austen. With April being National poetry month, this is a timely write. I especially liked:
Some say your life was tedious,
Colourless and dull.
But you fought the world
With your sword of wit.
(She was a legend, and she paved the road for other women writers. She was definitely ahead of the times.)
Also of important note:
If only you had known
How great you would become
When you walked heartbroken
Down the streets of Bath.
(So true, so sad.)
Lovely artwork choice, and now I'm going to read some of her poems. So much for reviewing. You may be the last of today - lol. Smiles, LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and tribute to Joan Austen and her work that impress you and a wish that the mentioned poet life could have been longer that she could produce more works.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem and tribute to Joan Austen and her work that impress you and a wish that the mentioned poet life could have been longer that she could produce more works.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your constant support, Sandra.
Comment from Bucketlist
I'm sure she woul love it! You are so god at free verse. Historical figure poetry is not usually appealing to me. That said, I make exception for this famous lady. Thanks for sharing,
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I'm sure she woul love it! You are so god at free verse. Historical figure poetry is not usually appealing to me. That said, I make exception for this famous lady. Thanks for sharing,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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This is so kind of you, Trisha.
Thanks for the six stars.
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My pleasure
Comment from Liberty Justice
VERY INTERESTING how this inspiration poem tells about how a person lived a dull boring life, but found some way to relive her life, and use items to occupy her time and enjoy living more. NICELY DONE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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VERY INTERESTING how this inspiration poem tells about how a person lived a dull boring life, but found some way to relive her life, and use items to occupy her time and enjoy living more. NICELY DONE. liberty justice
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Ricky1024
"For Jane was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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"For Jane was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for reading.
