Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this poem that is an inspiration to draw near to God and receive a closer experience with him. Keep on writing and giving encouragement!
Bill

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Well, Vance -- a lovely metaphor for those bright memories and what a wonderful vision for the wisdom contained within them to flow and take their place in the winds of the next generation... BEAUTIFUL!! ;) Thanx so very much for sharing such a lovely offering! ;)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I love the picture. When I look at the flower, it looks fuzzy not clear. Somedays our brain is like that. Especially when its allergy season. To focus on a subject feels like viewing through a glass that cloudy.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

Comment from Vance Seagle

Excellent

Certainly interesting perspective worthy of deep consideration! but such thought depth is not necessarily reached by many who do not seek the potential truths awaiting their enlightenment! so we who wish to share the gifts of wisdom we might indeed have been blessed with, may only pray and hope that our efforts to help others shall some day be appreciated and taken advantage of!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019

Comment from val fitchie

Excellent

wow. I went back to this one and I see I didn't see something the first time. It is so elegantly unraveled in it's profoundity, I couldn't recognize this as being one long (and excellent) metaphor about the garment of gratitude. I am humbled concerning my usual ability to assess and I honor you now with this warm glowing review. You are our fanstory king

 Comment Written 12-May-2018

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reply by the author on 13-May-2018

Thanks so much val, for another delightful and uplifting review. Glad you liked this one! Vance

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Nicely done Vance. I hate when I miss your posts. I have a few personal issues, but good to read this one.
Best wishes my friend.
RG

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks again RG, for this great review and stars...so much appreciated! Vance

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Vance. Thank you for sharing your good poem which I enjoyed reading. Image is magical and your words are well described. Lines flow well from one to another. Best for me:
"I can feel the chunks of rust breaking off the sides of my brain and sliding into my mind with aching hopes of some magnetic force waiting to pull them together into some unified order of sanity that will yield rich wisdom." Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018

Thanks so much Marilyn for your lovely review and stars! As always, wonderful to hear from you! Blessings always! Vance

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Vance you picked out the perfect format (prose) to say some magnetic force
comes the gift of wisdom, if you want it. And, my, don't we need the wisdom of God to simply make meaning out of life these days? If you want the gift of wisdom, ask God for the gift, and then co-operate with God in the life you are being given.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018

Thanks dear Gert for another lovely review and gracious stars. It is always my joy and delight to hear from you! blessings and hugs always! Vance

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a wonderful piece of prose poetry about the aging process and letting God and love keep the rusty parts from falling apart.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much dragonpoet, for this lovely review and stars!. I really appreciate it and do hope that it may stop some of the rust facing us out there! HAVE A GREAT DAY: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Apr-2018

You're so very kindly welcome, Vance.

Joan

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This Emotional piece about tour feelings from above was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much Ricky, for another lovely review and generous stars! Always a delight to hear from you! Vance

reply by Ricky1024 on 11-Apr-2018

And, always a pleasure.
Have A blessed day.
Dr. Ricky 1024