Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, In the Night Sky, uses the allowed syllables and required rhyme to present the watchful soul whose presence in the sky gives us ease and happiness. Nice.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a feeling of becoming a part of the process as the poet notices the brightest star watches over the poet from the sky; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us, wish you good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I love this contest... I've really enjoyed the reads and yours is especially lovely. I know your Ma is shining brightly on you very sweet read. thanks. yours, diana

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018

Thanks Diana

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the message in your poem.
-The imagery is also good.
-I am not sure about the last
line rhyming, as all three lines have to rhyme.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018

Thanks for your comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Mar-2018

You are welcome.