Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "One Silent Night"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
The photo was chosen well, but it is really eerie--which is perfect for your message! Yet if we have faith and know we are safe it shouldn't be too scary. The poem's title is soft and sweet and I like that as you begin to read the words, you notice that you can choose the darkness or the light. I'll stick to the light. Thank you for sharing your deep thoughts on the rapture. They are very well written.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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The photo was chosen well, but it is really eerie--which is perfect for your message! Yet if we have faith and know we are safe it shouldn't be too scary. The poem's title is soft and sweet and I like that as you begin to read the words, you notice that you can choose the darkness or the light. I'll stick to the light. Thank you for sharing your deep thoughts on the rapture. They are very well written.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Stay in the light, there's something in the dark. I think the picture is of a dog, my intent merely to show anger. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Swampfox1
Great job of bringing reality to the place where things hide not to be seen. I like it and it makes a person think. I wonder if I should dig up the kitchen sink and keep it ready. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Great job of bringing reality to the place where things hide not to be seen. I like it and it makes a person think. I wonder if I should dig up the kitchen sink and keep it ready. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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How exactly to prepare makes survival better. Glad features in this work was found appealing. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We have no defense against the stranger that invades our premises in the darkest night to take our possessions without harming us is a blessing in itself.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We have no defense against the stranger that invades our premises in the darkest night to take our possessions without harming us is a blessing in itself.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Not to be harm by them is the ultimate desire. Person able to evade the out rage of anger maintaining their well being dispute occurrences. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from karenina
Very contemporary style..
Not always easy to follow...
A vampire? A nightmare?
Oh.
The Rapture....
Wish you'd introduced that sooner.....
A dark, dark vision of faith....
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Very contemporary style..
Not always easy to follow...
A vampire? A nightmare?
Oh.
The Rapture....
Wish you'd introduced that sooner.....
A dark, dark vision of faith....
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I hear your thought and will take in its view into consideration. Glad dispute that factor other aspects of this work was found appealing. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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Some poetry is intentionally ambivalent.....allowing the reader to insert his or her own interpretation.....Karenna
Comment from Liberty Justice
Interesting! This poem could have a double meaning. Could be speaking of a re-birth asking resident if he or she is ready for a renewal or arrival of the Lord. Of course, could be actually speaking of an invader breaking into one's house. WELL DONE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Interesting! This poem could have a double meaning. Could be speaking of a re-birth asking resident if he or she is ready for a renewal or arrival of the Lord. Of course, could be actually speaking of an invader breaking into one's house. WELL DONE. liberty justice
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Both analysis makes this write statement. The thought of one being taken and another left. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from meeshu
Ominous,Powerful. well scribed TPAC. very clever how you turned a Christmas hymn on its head. excellent imagery, I swear I saw Dickens' first ghost go by......meeshu
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Ominous,Powerful. well scribed TPAC. very clever how you turned a Christmas hymn on its head. excellent imagery, I swear I saw Dickens' first ghost go by......meeshu
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Interesting viewpoint, although not my intent, yet please such a comparison does exist. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about one silent night, home invasion, no chance to escape or relief? Thoughts of the forthcoming rapture continue all night; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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This speaks about one silent night, home invasion, no chance to escape or relief? Thoughts of the forthcoming rapture continue all night; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Good times, I have to wonder. Just event necessary to advance us from our caged darkness. Actions to promote light unto a darken world. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Marisela Contona
This was a good poem on a dark topic. Your words were very descriptive I felt like I was.there in the moment, and I think that's what good works are supposed to do.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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This was a good poem on a dark topic. Your words were very descriptive I felt like I was.there in the moment, and I think that's what good works are supposed to do.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Quite a statement, someone else make a similar comment about another write. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this was good. A bit creepy at the end, that final line wrapping it all up very nicely. I'm afraid a thief wouldn't get very far in our house. All the alarms would go off and scare them away, hopefully. Nice picture, which accentuates the mood of the poem. I noticed no errors, it read flawlessly, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Hello, this was good. A bit creepy at the end, that final line wrapping it all up very nicely. I'm afraid a thief wouldn't get very far in our house. All the alarms would go off and scare them away, hopefully. Nice picture, which accentuates the mood of the poem. I noticed no errors, it read flawlessly, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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The ideal detailed in the write was these security features were bypassed. Glad this work found interest. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
