A Magical Meeting
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triquatrain poem. A magical meeting in the woods that turns out to be someone who plays magical music just for you to heat and to never forget the experience.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Triquatrain poem. A magical meeting in the woods that turns out to be someone who plays magical music just for you to heat and to never forget the experience.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Wouldn't it be wonderful to really experience something like that? Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from wordsfromsue
This was beautiful. :-)
Perfect month to release it, with all our Irish celebrations. I felt a Celtic lyrical vibe, while reading it.
Really nice work, damommy. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This was beautiful. :-)
Perfect month to release it, with all our Irish celebrations. I felt a Celtic lyrical vibe, while reading it.
Really nice work, damommy. :-)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I'm glad you think so. I appreciate your wonderful comments.
Comment from MelB
Hi Yvonne, I enjoyed reading this poem. Wonderful rhyme, rhythm, and flow. The artwork goes perfectly and the title too. A magical meeting would be wonderful to have once in life, twice would be a dream.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi Yvonne, I enjoyed reading this poem. Wonderful rhyme, rhythm, and flow. The artwork goes perfectly and the title too. A magical meeting would be wonderful to have once in life, twice would be a dream.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I know. I wish I could really have such a meeting. Thank you so much.
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You're welcome. It would be something!
Comment from Cedar
This is such a beautiful poem, everything about it is perfect. Your rhyming and presentation are both exceptional.
I really enjoyed reading this. The style it is written in allows the words to simply roll off the reader's tongue.
It wouldn't surprise me to see this one nominated for the "Poem of the Month" contest.
Have a blessed Sunday, my friend...Bill
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is such a beautiful poem, everything about it is perfect. Your rhyming and presentation are both exceptional.
I really enjoyed reading this. The style it is written in allows the words to simply roll off the reader's tongue.
It wouldn't surprise me to see this one nominated for the "Poem of the Month" contest.
Have a blessed Sunday, my friend...Bill
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a lovely thing to say. Thank you. I'm happy you like it.
Comment from Writeling
What a lovely idea for a poem, well written. I'm not sure about the double spacing throughout... maybe it would add to the 'carry' of the poem if you changed that (?)
I really like: 'Then, he was gone, the curtain drawn,' -
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a lovely idea for a poem, well written. I'm not sure about the double spacing throughout... maybe it would add to the 'carry' of the poem if you changed that (?)
I really like: 'Then, he was gone, the curtain drawn,' -
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That was a favorite phrase of mine, too.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very good with a bit of Irish influence.
Have you heard from Phyllis Stewart? She hasn't been on the site for over a week. I sent her an email asking about her, but she hasn't responded. I hope she's alright.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Very good with a bit of Irish influence.
Have you heard from Phyllis Stewart? She hasn't been on the site for over a week. I sent her an email asking about her, but she hasn't responded. I hope she's alright.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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No, I haven't. Hmmmm. Now, I'm worried. Have you tried telephoning her? I don't know if I should.
Thanks for reviewing. Let me know if you hear anything from Phyllis.
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems like you were hearing the music of nature in a serene place. If the speaker did see someone, she probably saw Puck, the Oldest of the Old Ones of mythology. One who protects nature. Though he is generally thought of only British.
Which goes with your Celtic blessing. Well done triquatrain poem.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This seems like you were hearing the music of nature in a serene place. If the speaker did see someone, she probably saw Puck, the Oldest of the Old Ones of mythology. One who protects nature. Though he is generally thought of only British.
Which goes with your Celtic blessing. Well done triquatrain poem.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I hadn't thought of Puck. One reader suggest Pan. I didn't have either in mind, but I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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I thought of Puck because I recently finished a fantasy book where he was an important character.
Your welcome.
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi Yvonne,
I can't attest to the conforming to the format but I loved this piece. The rhythm is great and very pleasing, very lyrical in its own right.
great job
G
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi Yvonne,
I can't attest to the conforming to the format but I loved this piece. The rhythm is great and very pleasing, very lyrical in its own right.
great job
G
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Awww, thank you so much. I appreciate this so much. Doubly so because I know you give honest reviews.
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello dear lady DAMOMMY: If your humor was CA$H, you'd be millionaire. You may see me a zillion times; but you'll never see me limping. LOL. You style is adorable. I love your poem. It's almost as witty as you are pretty. I've imagined that your musician was quite a magician with such an enchanting tune. That he could make your heart yearn to soon return, to your nook beside the brook real soon. Then he'd reappear so you could hear his magic music once more. And you could delight in the fruit from his flute, a wayward toot, encore.
DAMOMMY, I've written a poem somewhat like yours. If you can spare your time, please scroll down my portfolio page and view my poem entitled, "CLOUD MINE." Thank you. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello dear lady DAMOMMY: If your humor was CA$H, you'd be millionaire. You may see me a zillion times; but you'll never see me limping. LOL. You style is adorable. I love your poem. It's almost as witty as you are pretty. I've imagined that your musician was quite a magician with such an enchanting tune. That he could make your heart yearn to soon return, to your nook beside the brook real soon. Then he'd reappear so you could hear his magic music once more. And you could delight in the fruit from his flute, a wayward toot, encore.
DAMOMMY, I've written a poem somewhat like yours. If you can spare your time, please scroll down my portfolio page and view my poem entitled, "CLOUD MINE." Thank you. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a wonderful, delightful review. Thank you so much. I will take a look at yours.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely and irresistibly charming poem, in beautifully constructed, and musical rhythm and rhyme. It captured my imagination and fervent wish that the encounter will be repeated and the place will appear again, when you retrace your steps and find that magic brook...
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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In my opinion, a lovely and irresistibly charming poem, in beautifully constructed, and musical rhythm and rhyme. It captured my imagination and fervent wish that the encounter will be repeated and the place will appear again, when you retrace your steps and find that magic brook...
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Wouldn't that be wonderful? Thank you for this lovely review.
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You are very welcome, my pleasure - a magical read. Thank you for sharing...Eve
