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The Thrill

Loving until the end.

9 total reviews 
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a very well-written 1-6-1 poem, even though it's in the story section...
It paints a clear picture in my mind, and the picture really adds weight to the words. It's both happy and sad at the same time because those two will forever love each other, but there time is almost ending. Great work :)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much!
Comment from zanya
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Here in this succinct format is celebration of real and longterm love without frills or fuss or overlay of filters - just heartfelt and delightful with a superb pic to accompany

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much!!
Comment from BeasPeas
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A good combination of image and words. The couple surely looks content and satisfied with their relationship. Longevity is what it's all about. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the great review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
Your story of love is clear in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 1-6-1 micro-story, The Thrill, has the required few formed words, although it doesn't deliver a plot. The 1-6-1 is typically a poetic format. It does meet the requirements for the challenge though. Happy day.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I love this. The photo makes me think of a couple that has loved each other a long, long time. And it is still a thrill. How very, very nice. Hope you win the competition.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you very much, Debbie. I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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What a wonderful message you have shared with readers in your well-constructed 1-6-1 poem. And your poem holds great truth...at least for my husband and me. We will be celebrating our 39th wedding anniversary this summer. We have been so fortunate; our love just keeps growing... Thank you for sharing! Best Wishes!

diane

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much and I send you congratulations on your long lasting marriage. I pray the Lord will continue to bless you. I appreciate the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yes, few words here but the message is clear, loving into old age is a privilege that not many achieve, a delightful write, love the artwork too! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from mvbrooks
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What a great picture choice--sure to evoke smiles. And the it becomes a great embodiment of your words. Making three short lines rhyme is a challenge itself --then making a story of it. Well done on both counts.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for your great comments. I appreciate you taking the time to review.