Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Hi there Sandollar,
Yes, I believe you not only met the parameters of the 75 Words Flash Story but wrote a very different type of story as well..which I enjoyed.
It is quite a challenge to write only 75 words, I know...
The artwork is rather amazing as well...
Lisasview

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for your review. I like flash fiction. It allows me to investigate the different ways one can say a certain thing with the word restraint. You kind of get a chance to stretch your brain. Glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Lisasview on 29-Dec-2023

Let's keep checking on one another.. sounds like an excellent idea..
Lisa

reply by the author on 29-Dec-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done. I'm glad I read this, a good entry in this contest, you have latched on to a psyche that appears to fit the artwork perfectly, well done, witty this great entry. Good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your review and rating. So glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for your blessing as well.

reply by royowen on 21-Mar-2018

Most welcome

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

It's never easy to reflect within given parameters but, you did great in this gravitating write with superb word choice and phrases; picture perfect; thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

I thank you very much for your review and rating. Your encouragement is very much appreciated.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction writing prompt.
You've told your story clearly of selling your soul.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for your review and rating. It is very much appreciated. Thanks also for the good wishes.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Yes, it is a difficult challenge. Normally, a story includes setting, character(s), conflict, and resolution. Tough to accomplish in so few words--but then, that what makes these short-short stories challenging. True Flash even includes a twist, or ironic ending. Even harder.

Best of luck with The Committee.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your review. It is much appteciated.