Dancing the night away
I love to dance5 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your light and simple poem about the joy of dancing. It is nicely written and I think you picked a good artwork piece to enhance your words. Best wishes!
angel123
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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I like your light and simple poem about the joy of dancing. It is nicely written and I think you picked a good artwork piece to enhance your words. Best wishes!
angel123
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thankss a lot for reading and reviewing
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Ms. Dancy Nancy: If I were a magician I'd be your musician, and I'd use my magic to play, my music your way, so that you could ballet, and dance until night turns to day. A prancing twirl. A pretty girl, gliding about the floor. Along with your tune, I'd sing you my croon, and beseech you, "dance encore." To the end from the start, from the bottom of my heart, I'd play you a symphony, so that gorgeous you would dance like you do, and the whole world could see. With the fineness that you've got, "NO!" you'd never sit and rot, you'd dance while I play music and sing. So go pretty girl, dance prance and swirl, entertain us...do your thing. Thank You. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello Ms. Dancy Nancy: If I were a magician I'd be your musician, and I'd use my magic to play, my music your way, so that you could ballet, and dance until night turns to day. A prancing twirl. A pretty girl, gliding about the floor. Along with your tune, I'd sing you my croon, and beseech you, "dance encore." To the end from the start, from the bottom of my heart, I'd play you a symphony, so that gorgeous you would dance like you do, and the whole world could see. With the fineness that you've got, "NO!" you'd never sit and rot, you'd dance while I play music and sing. So go pretty girl, dance prance and swirl, entertain us...do your thing. Thank You. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for the stars and the great review.
Comment from MissMerri
Good little poem, telling a complete story in fifteen words. Not bad! I like to dance too, so I could relate. Although I'd have to admit, I've never danced in a costume quite like that one in the picture. LOL A fun and nicely rhymed poem that should be a hit with all who read it. Good luck in the contest too. MM
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Good little poem, telling a complete story in fifteen words. Not bad! I like to dance too, so I could relate. Although I'd have to admit, I've never danced in a costume quite like that one in the picture. LOL A fun and nicely rhymed poem that should be a hit with all who read it. Good luck in the contest too. MM
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Wabigoon
Well, I doubt rot! Maybe some other things. "Rot" is too strong a word there, or too strong a negative. "I'll sit it out?" Something more like that. I doubt you are a person who sits there and "rots," music or not.
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Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Well, I doubt rot! Maybe some other things. "Rot" is too strong a word there, or too strong a negative. "I'll sit it out?" Something more like that. I doubt you are a person who sits there and "rots," music or not.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your commments. "Sit and rot" is just an english expression. I didn't mean it literally.
Comment from beizanten
Beautiful and sexy picture. It must be hard to write such short poetry but you have done really well, the poetry is pretty good, rhyme well and written in easy to understand words. Great job, keep up your great work!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Beautiful and sexy picture. It must be hard to write such short poetry but you have done really well, the poetry is pretty good, rhyme well and written in easy to understand words. Great job, keep up your great work!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Many thanks
