My Sis
Big sister takes care of little sister11 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Friend,
I love the fact that you felt protective of your little sister, and I also enjoyed reading how you read to her to allay her fears. Now the revenge part just made me smile. Good for the both of you! And I hope all's well that end's well! What a story. Never mess with two sisters; that is for certain. A delightful read!
diane
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
I love the fact that you felt protective of your little sister, and I also enjoyed reading how you read to her to allay her fears. Now the revenge part just made me smile. Good for the both of you! And I hope all's well that end's well! What a story. Never mess with two sisters; that is for certain. A delightful read!
diane
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Diane for this delightful review and five star rating. The story isn?t true, but there is another about rescuing her from a kidnapper. Another sister helped. He had put her in his van. We jumped in and I pulled his hair and my other sister but him until he let her go. We found out later that he was a professional burglar, a criminal
Comment from emptypage
Interesting poem. I love that the one sibling (bother? sister?) was so attached that s/he not only exposed the cheater, but helped plan AND execute revenge....
And what was the revenge? I'm confused. My brain isn't working still. I've beebn very sick. Acid under the hood instead of on them? And why did that break up the cheating couple?
Fun read.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Interesting poem. I love that the one sibling (bother? sister?) was so attached that s/he not only exposed the cheater, but helped plan AND execute revenge....
And what was the revenge? I'm confused. My brain isn't working still. I've beebn very sick. Acid under the hood instead of on them? And why did that break up the cheating couple?
Fun read.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review and five star rating. The acid was put under the hood (of a car). The cheaters were stuck somewhere because the car stopped working. They did not have cell phones in my world so they had to walk a long way. They maybe got into a fight over it. For whatever reason related to the car breaking down, the cheaters broke up after that. Maybe they just broke up fir another reason. The point is that they broke up and it had something to do with the car not working due to the acid under the hood. I am not doing a realistic painting here.
Comment from ameen786
What a wonderful story and I hope it's just that...not true; sometimes the elder sister has to play a mother to the younger siblings and you reflect that emotion beautifully in this rhymer; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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What a wonderful story and I hope it's just that...not true; sometimes the elder sister has to play a mother to the younger siblings and you reflect that emotion beautifully in this rhymer; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thabk you, ameen786 for your nice review and rating
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a cute little poem describing a big sisters care and concern for her little sister. I remember my older sister taking up for me when I was growing up and watching out for me. I guess she figured that she needed to because I was quiet and painfully shy. I like this well written little poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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This is a cute little poem describing a big sisters care and concern for her little sister. I remember my older sister taking up for me when I was growing up and watching out for me. I guess she figured that she needed to because I was quiet and painfully shy. I like this well written little poem. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Jeffrey for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam how personable this piece is along withe the drawing which puts the icing on the cake. Its a finushed masterpiece. I love it. And as all your work I feel your heartbeat. Thank you again for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Pam how personable this piece is along withe the drawing which puts the icing on the cake. Its a finushed masterpiece. I love it. And as all your work I feel your heartbeat. Thank you again for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you Mary. Besides my husband, you are my biggest fans. Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
An interesting story of plotting between sisters.
Sometimes we just need to look out for each other.
Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Sharon.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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An interesting story of plotting between sisters.
Sometimes we just need to look out for each other.
Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Sharon.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sharon fir your nice review and rating
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A lovely painting and poem to match and such sweet memories you have of reading to your sister, heartfelt words here in your warm and loving poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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A lovely painting and poem to match and such sweet memories you have of reading to your sister, heartfelt words here in your warm and loving poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Dolly for your lovely review and high rating
Comment from Sherman541
I love the picture, it reminds me of a setting outside in the gazebo, in the sunlight with my two younger sisters. I loved spending time with them. We also had a room in one of our houses, that was similar to, like a little cove. I love the story within the poem. Very nice rhyming, too. Sherman541
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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I love the picture, it reminds me of a setting outside in the gazebo, in the sunlight with my two younger sisters. I loved spending time with them. We also had a room in one of our houses, that was similar to, like a little cove. I love the story within the poem. Very nice rhyming, too. Sherman541
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sherman541 for this lovely teview and fife star rating. Early on in life I invented stories. This is not a true story, but reading to her was real
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You are welcome and part of writing to do the research to make it believable, even when it is fiction :)
Comment from Susan Burger
Your love for your sister shines through in this lovely poem you wrote. Sometimes the truth hurts, It is especially hard, when we have to be the one to tell our loved ones the truth. Very nice job!
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Your love for your sister shines through in this lovely poem you wrote. Sometimes the truth hurts, It is especially hard, when we have to be the one to tell our loved ones the truth. Very nice job!
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Susan for your lovely review and high rating. I see it is St. Paddy?s day where you are. So, happy happy
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done, great rhyme and story. I'm sure everyone thinks of ways to get back at a cheater. I'm glad there was no violence involved. =} Just to the engine. I'm sure your sister would very much appreciate you sticking up for her should anything like this happen. well done, have a good evening. Rox
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Well done, great rhyme and story. I'm sure everyone thinks of ways to get back at a cheater. I'm glad there was no violence involved. =} Just to the engine. I'm sure your sister would very much appreciate you sticking up for her should anything like this happen. well done, have a good evening. Rox
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you very much, Roxanna for this wonderful review and the five star rating. Happy St. Patrick?s day
