This is it, and nothing more
Six word memoir6 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Non-Fiction writing prompt.
Your short memoir tells a strong story on just six words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Non-Fiction writing prompt.
Your short memoir tells a strong story on just six words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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I appreciate your comments, it seemed to resonate well with some. Learning quite a bit about writing at this site. Appreciate your contribution.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The character outlay in the memoir is the protagonist, who is unfortunately left nameless. The setting in which he functioned is equally left unknown. The scenario which smacks of an hegemony of indecision, equally beggars my thought on what actually constitute the preoccupation of the character in this memoir.
The work no doubt highlights the coming into being of a creature which manifested for the sole purpose of working with CLUES, and has since gone comatose on account of the dearth of CLUES.
Let me conclude by stating that this is not the memoir of a human but that of creature puked by human imagination.
An excellent outing into the creative mill! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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The character outlay in the memoir is the protagonist, who is unfortunately left nameless. The setting in which he functioned is equally left unknown. The scenario which smacks of an hegemony of indecision, equally beggars my thought on what actually constitute the preoccupation of the character in this memoir.
The work no doubt highlights the coming into being of a creature which manifested for the sole purpose of working with CLUES, and has since gone comatose on account of the dearth of CLUES.
Let me conclude by stating that this is not the memoir of a human but that of creature puked by human imagination.
An excellent outing into the creative mill! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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I like your comments. In some ways spot on. World is full of clues. And indeed I focus on them as I don?t read people naturally. Form limited to six words. Maybe best for readers who know the person- me. But the six words conjured quite a mental picture a prime directive of writing. Don?t know what puked by human imagination means -,please clarify. I did appreciate and enjoy your insightful comments.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Alexander Vasa
hahaahaha I have never seen writing like this. I can't work out if you're being kind to yourself, or unkind. Perhaps you're a timeless wonder. I liked it, and thanks for sharing. Ana.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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hahaahaha I have never seen writing like this. I can't work out if you're being kind to yourself, or unkind. Perhaps you're a timeless wonder. I liked it, and thanks for sharing. Ana.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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That is the question. Am I kind or unkind? Kind in acceptance of innate traits. Less kind with perception of being an odd duck. I have more gifts than most but that at times comes with a cost. Thanks for comments from six words, you are close to spot on.
Comment from Pamusart
The number of words you have is six . Per the rules in the contest, the minimum number of words must be 500. I do not think their entry meets the tequirements of the contest. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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The number of words you have is six . Per the rules in the contest, the minimum number of words must be 500. I do not think their entry meets the tequirements of the contest. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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I don?t do well in any contest but was looking for feedback on six word form. Got really good stuff so far. I?m sure plenty of clues in contest description re 500 words. I just missed them. Thanks for looking at it. What gut reactions did you get from it?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your six words are of course brief and much can be read into these words, confusion and disillusion come to mind, but you seem to have muddled through life despite this disorientation, I wish you luck with the contest, but I fear they may be looking for more words Frank, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Your six words are of course brief and much can be read into these words, confusion and disillusion come to mind, but you seem to have muddled through life despite this disorientation, I wish you luck with the contest, but I fear they may be looking for more words Frank, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Yes but it got a word from you. And that is worth more than votes.
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You?re a sweetheart Frank x
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks another new morning, but nothing new to find there, everything remains the same, nothing changed, again the same routine, same course of living; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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This speaks another new morning, but nothing new to find there, everything remains the same, nothing changed, again the same routine, same course of living; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Very little stays the same thus an iffy life. But an interesting one indeed.
