The Life of Mrs. Armstrong
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Surprise, Surprise."Out of retirement..
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Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful ending with you being able to be there to see your young techs take flight!!! I have a great deal more respect for all our medical techs thanks to your writing, Alie!
When I saw this title, I thought you surprised the students by appearing at their CPR training class. Did you teach them that, too?
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Wonderful ending with you being able to be there to see your young techs take flight!!! I have a great deal more respect for all our medical techs thanks to your writing, Alie!
When I saw this title, I thought you surprised the students by appearing at their CPR training class. Did you teach them that, too?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much Helene for reviewing and your great comments. Sadly I did not teach them CPR.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
I think your writing is very proficient and I learned the proper word for vomit. You tell it like it is, and I'm afraid it made me realize that I'm glad I wasn't working in the field of medicine and the sick. I guess in some ways I do, but not with all those body fluids, I have a strong gagging reflex too, ahahahaha I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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I think your writing is very proficient and I learned the proper word for vomit. You tell it like it is, and I'm afraid it made me realize that I'm glad I wasn't working in the field of medicine and the sick. I guess in some ways I do, but not with all those body fluids, I have a strong gagging reflex too, ahahahaha I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you very much for reading and then taking the time to review. I appreciate you kind comments, sorry if I caused any discomfort..
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alie. This has been an amazing journey with Mrs. Armstrong and her students. What the medical profession deals with on a daily basis is incredible and they all deserve gold stars. Through it all they keep their spirits up, especially in front of their patients which they really may not inwardly be able to do sometimes. Your writing is clear, explicit and interesting. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Hi Alie. This has been an amazing journey with Mrs. Armstrong and her students. What the medical profession deals with on a daily basis is incredible and they all deserve gold stars. Through it all they keep their spirits up, especially in front of their patients which they really may not inwardly be able to do sometimes. Your writing is clear, explicit and interesting. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Marilyn for reading and reviewing and being such a great follower. I agree with you that they do all deserve gold stars. Thank you for your kind comments. (smile)
Comment from Lionmagik
This was a really good piece of writing I enjoyed it. I admire the class they have more stomach than I do haha. Some of the pictures this story created turned my stomach, but yet made me laugh. I loved the student's reactions and how they ultimately saw the lesson's through and exceeded.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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This was a really good piece of writing I enjoyed it. I admire the class they have more stomach than I do haha. Some of the pictures this story created turned my stomach, but yet made me laugh. I loved the student's reactions and how they ultimately saw the lesson's through and exceeded.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. I certainly appreciate your kind comments and of course the six stars. Again thank you.
Comment from MelB
The other two group can hover and watch. - group(s)
They now knew the difference and how to direct to patient to produce and provide them. - direct (the) patient
A great ending to the story! Sounds like a fun party, but it had to be sad to see them go. I'm sure you became attached to them all.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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The other two group can hover and watch. - group(s)
They now knew the difference and how to direct to patient to produce and provide them. - direct (the) patient
A great ending to the story! Sounds like a fun party, but it had to be sad to see them go. I'm sure you became attached to them all.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Mel for reviewing and for your kind comments. I will make those corrections shortly. Yes, they are sadly missed.
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You're welcome. I miss things in my writing all the time.
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(smile) I think you catch them before you submit, because I don't see them.
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I hope so:)
Comment from royowen
Well done with this series, this last episode was written in great commentary, and the descriptive text was "deliciously" absorbing. No wonder some of the students has gag reflexes.
Well written, Mrs. Armstrong was a great character who took her work seriously, but a good teacher character, and the students also descriptively good, sometimes they could have been described as "antagonists". Good job, blessings, Roy
Typo : There (were) super happy to learn.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Well done with this series, this last episode was written in great commentary, and the descriptive text was "deliciously" absorbing. No wonder some of the students has gag reflexes.
Well written, Mrs. Armstrong was a great character who took her work seriously, but a good teacher character, and the students also descriptively good, sometimes they could have been described as "antagonists". Good job, blessings, Roy
Typo : There (were) super happy to learn.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review, I really appreciate your kind comments, I will take care of that typo in a moment. Again thanks.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
You should be very proud. You and your students both did a wonderful job. I know I could never work with bodily fluids or blood. I'd never graduate from a nursing school. :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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You should be very proud. You and your students both did a wonderful job. I know I could never work with bodily fluids or blood. I'd never graduate from a nursing school. :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks Phyllis for reading and reviewing. I am so glad that you enjoyed it and thank you so much for faithfully following. Your kind comments mean so much.
Comment from Pantygynt
This has been a great adventure and most enjoyable to read. What will you do with it now? It might serial in some kind of medical mag I suppose. I noticed a couple of things that need sorting.
"The other two group can hoover and watch." So that's how she gets the place vaccuumed. I think you mean "hover". Lol.
"...and in fact woke up about five months later." Did you really mean months? Were they comatose?
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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This has been a great adventure and most enjoyable to read. What will you do with it now? It might serial in some kind of medical mag I suppose. I noticed a couple of things that need sorting.
"The other two group can hoover and watch." So that's how she gets the place vaccuumed. I think you mean "hover". Lol.
"...and in fact woke up about five months later." Did you really mean months? Were they comatose?
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks Pantygnt for reading and reviewing. I am so glad that you enjoyed it and thank you so much for faithfully following. Your kind comments mean so much. Who knows what will come from it, but it was fun to do. I will make those changes shortly. I did mean hover lol, yes she was comatose for about five months after the maggot incident and had been for about a month before, she was brought in unconscious with breathing difficulties and placed on a ventilator.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a gross read. I loved it. Mrs. Armstrong is always so enlightening and entertaining. My daughter is in medical school. Hope her instructors are half as good as Mrs. Armstrong. It was interesting to learn about the samples. My poor daughter. So they actually use real vomit in medical training. I never thought about that. And the part about the live maggots. Is that for real? Could that happen? I am growing with your students. Thanks for the training.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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What a gross read. I loved it. Mrs. Armstrong is always so enlightening and entertaining. My daughter is in medical school. Hope her instructors are half as good as Mrs. Armstrong. It was interesting to learn about the samples. My poor daughter. So they actually use real vomit in medical training. I never thought about that. And the part about the live maggots. Is that for real? Could that happen? I am growing with your students. Thanks for the training.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks for reading and then taking the time to review. A lot of things have changed since I was in school, eons ago lol. Now there is a preference to coddle the students and they don't get forewarning until they actually are exposed to it. The part about the maggots was real and will never be forgotten. From what I understand the patient was never told all of the details, thank goodness. Again thanks.
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just horrible
