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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Scene at a Play (Part 1)"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
13 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Lots of six-star fun. That Ned is definitely a lost cause. Pons will have a hard time explaining the play to him. This reminds me of an early Andy Griffith monologue trying to explain football. Clever dialogue. That's a great line "I don't know about da curtains but da clothes er def'nit on sale." Great! You might say where these two are from so we can understand the reason for the dialect. judi
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Lots of six-star fun. That Ned is definitely a lost cause. Pons will have a hard time explaining the play to him. This reminds me of an early Andy Griffith monologue trying to explain football. Clever dialogue. That's a great line "I don't know about da curtains but da clothes er def'nit on sale." Great! You might say where these two are from so we can understand the reason for the dialect. judi
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thsnks, Judi, for the terrific review. Bill
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Bill, :)
My goodness, why am I thinking that Ned reminds me of a certain orange-haired man in the White House?
Happy Weekend and Leprechaun Day,
Nome
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Hello, Bill, :)
My goodness, why am I thinking that Ned reminds me of a certain orange-haired man in the White House?
Happy Weekend and Leprechaun Day,
Nome
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Is Ned THAT bad? I better dial him back before he?s totally in believable.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
hahaahahha Ned is that dumb, love the banter about the Taming of the Shrew, or 'the da tannin' a da shoe'. This was entertaining. You write well Bill. I noticed no errors and would recommend this to others for review, bye for now, Ana.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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hahaahahha Ned is that dumb, love the banter about the Taming of the Shrew, or 'the da tannin' a da shoe'. This was entertaining. You write well Bill. I noticed no errors and would recommend this to others for review, bye for now, Ana.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ana
Comment from pbomar1115
That Ned never feels that he has anything to learn. He always points out the faults that he sees. While Pons struggle to correct his perspective, Ned gets religious.
Phillip
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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That Ned never feels that he has anything to learn. He always points out the faults that he sees. While Pons struggle to correct his perspective, Ned gets religious.
Phillip
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Ned is dumber than turnip.
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Hahaha!
Comment from nomi338
Ooh boy, trying to give Ned some culture is like trying to teach a dog science. The more you teach him, the dumber you get. It's like he just sucks the knowledge right out of you and replaces it with dumb. This poor guy leaves me dumbfounded. LOL.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Ooh boy, trying to give Ned some culture is like trying to teach a dog science. The more you teach him, the dumber you get. It's like he just sucks the knowledge right out of you and replaces it with dumb. This poor guy leaves me dumbfounded. LOL.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Cottage cheese is all the culture Ned can deal with.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Ned needs some glasses, too. It's good that Pons sticks with him and keeps him out of trouble. Then again, Ned is good for letting him know about K-mart deals.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Lol. Ned needs some glasses, too. It's good that Pons sticks with him and keeps him out of trouble. Then again, Ned is good for letting him know about K-mart deals.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from brenda faye curtis
The fun exchanges between Ned and Pons are starting to grow on me, and this is another good one.
I can't believe you'd have to explain the misspelled words, or the character of Ned! I thought it was pretty self-evident.
Anyway, looking forward to part two-take care and have a blessed day!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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The fun exchanges between Ned and Pons are starting to grow on me, and this is another good one.
I can't believe you'd have to explain the misspelled words, or the character of Ned! I thought it was pretty self-evident.
Anyway, looking forward to part two-take care and have a blessed day!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Brenda. Some reviewers think I just can?t talk or write well.
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You're welcome, Bill. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a hilarious script, Bill, it's going to bring the house down! LOL. You can turn a word into so many different meanings with Ned and his misunderstandings. LOL. I even think if you do it long enough you could probably get a theatre to play it. I'm looking forward to the next part already. xx Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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This is a hilarious script, Bill, it's going to bring the house down! LOL. You can turn a word into so many different meanings with Ned and his misunderstandings. LOL. I even think if you do it long enough you could probably get a theatre to play it. I'm looking forward to the next part already. xx Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Sandra, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Marge Setzer
I mixed up your characters in the last review. Sorry. Ned and Pons do not fail me in your trip to the theatre. I wonder how Pons maintains his patience, but he must enjoy the give-and-take because he always chooses Ned to accompany him to these functions. Great dialogue between the two - must say that at times I have a little trouble with translation. Come to think of it, I had a little trouble with the language of Shakespeare, too. Thanks for the laughs. Marge
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I mixed up your characters in the last review. Sorry. Ned and Pons do not fail me in your trip to the theatre. I wonder how Pons maintains his patience, but he must enjoy the give-and-take because he always chooses Ned to accompany him to these functions. Great dialogue between the two - must say that at times I have a little trouble with translation. Come to think of it, I had a little trouble with the language of Shakespeare, too. Thanks for the laughs. Marge
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Marge, for the great review. Bill
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You're welcome. And thanks for the six star review nomination. What a great surprise that was. Totally unexpected; totally appreciated. Marge
Comment from zekeziemann
I loved the "language" and especially from Ned. You have pretty well described him. I have trouble developing characters with only script.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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I loved the "language" and especially from Ned. You have pretty well described him. I have trouble developing characters with only script.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Zeke, for the great review. Bill
