Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This limerick, Colleen, has the rhyme scheme, theme, and beat that sell it ass the form. Colleen gets around, but gets a downgrading of propriety in another's poem.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thank you.

Comment from cailinraine8

Excellent

I like this and I see that you have the correct spelling for Colleen. I know because that is my name. My pen name is cailin raine, Cailin being a gaelic form for Colleen. And raine speaks of my love for nature. Enough of this, I like your poem and the fine wee Irish lassie in the picture!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Haha. Top O? the Mornin lass. Thanks for the great review and the comments you shared!! Best regards!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'Write A Limerick' writing prompt.
Your story is clear and well told in your jaunty Colleen verse.
Well done and goo luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Thank you for your great review.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I love limericks and this one is a winner. Well written, great picture and fun subject matter, not to mention my favorite color being showcased. I think this will do well in the contest, I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you. It was fun, but difficult to pull together. I really appreciate the review.

reply by Boogienights on 09-Mar-2018

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A very nice limerick in honor of St. Patrick's Day. Timely, cute and charming. Good cadence and rhyming. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the review and comments!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job mystery poet on your limerick. The picture is perfect for your well chosen words. Good job on the flow of lines as required. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you for taking taking the time to review it.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I love these limericks. They are the most fun poems that I have reviewed to date. I adore flirtatious Colleen. You satisfied all the limerick requirements, keeping it light and fun.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thanks so much, Debbie.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine Limerick, just one suggestion for the last line, change the (to) to (will), I think it will flow bette, but it's up to you and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thanks so much Dolly. I appreciate the suggestion and I?ll give it another look.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hello Mystery Poet,

This is the second Colleen I've come across in this contest today. It's a good Irish name. You have good meter that is required for the limerick form. I like your hint at naughtiness which tips your hat at the traditional bawdy style of limericks. Best wishes to you in this contest.

Sincerely Joy xx

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you Joy. I debated on capitalizing Colleen because it?s an Irish word for girl. We also know it?s a given first name in the States. Thanks for the review and comments.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A but you see she will break hearts without meaning to being so beautiful and flirtatious! It is natures way after all. They say men fall in love faster, women deeper. I don't know about that. I think men fall in lust faster and come to love later! A cute sweet and brilliant limerick well done this is perfect and a winner in my book kindest regards Meia xx

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you Meia. I liked your comments and observations. I?ve been practicing on limericks. It takes work to make them flow.