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Miss Sadie

Limerick Contest Entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a great entry for the contest and I thought it might win because it has all the right ingredients! Lots of fun, naughtiness and humour! I really enjoyed it and I love Limericks, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    TY, TY, TY!!! Don't come on too often so took a few days to realize I had placed!!! lol God bless and hugs
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Miss Sadie, is the winner in my book. You have the rhyme scheme, beat, and bawdy theme complete. This picture also reminds me of a girl I dated once. Only once.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    Bill, thanks so much for the great review and lovely 5-star review. I had to give it a try...never wrote one before! God bless and hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Great entry to the contest, dear anonymous poet. You have a perfect inflection for a Limerick which is hard to achieve and which very few entrants here professed.

Your picture is a bomb! (lol). I can understand how all men love her and women tear to bits. Excellent entry. On an aside note, I think it might benefit from centering.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
    ytbard, thank you eversomuch for such a lovely review and the 5-star rating on this contest entry. I truly appreciate that you took the time to read and leave your thoughts. I did like your suggestion to center the poem, however, I was not able to get it done before voting started. God bless and hugs.
reply by Eternal Muse on 18-Mar-2018
    Looks great! Good luck in the contest.
Comment from strandregs
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Well done with the form.
It lillts along nicely.
I used to write poo and piss limericks but it got boring.
Enjoy writing profound limericks.
here is a worse version for you:

while exposing her tits
she thinks of men's bits
And giving a stroke to poor Verdi
( composer)
Well - something like that.
good luck

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    lol....very funny! I love a good limerick...the nastier, the better! hahahaha Thank you for the kind review and the lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate both. God bless and hugs.
Comment from Pamusart
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Limerick does souund like a fun form of poetry to write. This is a good entry for the contest. Bawdy with a good rhyming pattern. Funny. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Pamusart, thanks so much for the kind and encouraging review and the lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate it. Have written so few limericks but do enjoy them. God bless and hugs.
Comment from Susan Burger
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This is a fun little limerick you have penned here! And the artwork you have chosen certainly supports your story of Miss Sadie! Nice job. Good luck in this competition!

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Susan Burger, thanks very much for the kind and encouraging review and lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate it very much. Also, thanks for the wish of luck...will need it. God bless and hugs