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I love my grandma

a contest entry

9 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5 love poem, I Love My Grandma, uses the correct format and hits me here because I am a grandparent and want my grandkids to feel that way about me. I'm two for four, but still working at it.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
    Hello grandpa, I know what you mean my friend, that's a wonderful blessing, enjoy them. I thank you for your time and the kind, thoughtful review; a very happy weekend to you.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Isn't that baby talk what are mine wants to believe that they are saying to us the little angels. Just like when a proud papa gets the big head when the baby says dadadada and you would have to beat that pop to death before He'll deny that baby isn't saying "daddy!"I love it and the picture s icing on the cake.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
    Hello Mary, I am pleased to read your wonderful comments and thank you very much for your time and thoughtful review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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That is true love talk. I believe that whole heartedly. Grandchildren do something spiritually to us that is akin to and surpasses romantic love. It is sheer happiness.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
    Hello Debbie; my friend I am delighted to read your wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Pamusart
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The photo is so sweet. So is your poem. But you forgot all of the spit and throw up. Oh well have to take the bad with the good and they outgrow it eventually. It is a good entry for the contest. Good luck with it. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
    Hello Pamusart, I am pleased you like the write; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from sunnilicious
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That's a very young looking grandma. Skincare can do wonders. Wowwie. And as for this poem, it's very cute. Good g-word/sound alliterations. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
    So happy you like the poem; I appreciate your thoughtful comments; thank you my friend.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks grandma and grandson love talks; poet remembers, says of his love to grandma; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
    Hello there my friend, I appreciate your time and glad that you like the write; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem writing prompt.
Your verse of baby love is cute and well written.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
    Hi Sharon, very kind of you to visit; appreciate your time and the encouraging review; thank you very much.
Comment from pome lover
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cute, cute! truly an original love poem - as only a grandmother could write it.
am still smiling, so...good job! If you do have a new grandson, congratulations and enjoy, enjoy! anyway, loved your poem. It said it all.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
    Hi Katharine, I am delighted to read your wonderful comments; appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
reply by pome lover on 06-Mar-2018
    most welcome
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 love poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great words and great imagery. The grandmother/grandson talk hit home with me! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
    Teri my friend, I thank you for your time and the kind review; so happy that you like the write; thank you.