Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi estory, this is a wonderful uplifting poem showing that after rain the sun breaks out giving way to a new brilliant day by way of displaying the rainbow, which is also a sign of hope. You had great imagery in your wonderful poem. Very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and for all your comments supporting this poem. I am glad you found the imagery so uplifting, I kind of spent some time crafting those. This poem musically is in a more free flowing prose format carried largely by the images appreciate all the support estory

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is a beautiful and very descriptive poem about the rainbow. I like the style of it and how it flows together. You did a great job with this. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and all your comments supporting this upbeat piece. I am glad you enjoyed it estory

Comment from amada

Excellent

Thank you for writing these lines "and thanksgiving upraised after the storm passes..." Very uplifting and compassionate poem. i needed today, God knows...
Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and all your comments supporting this piece. I am glad it resonated for you, that the realization of grace comes through estory

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Everyone loves rainbows. Have you ever seen one while it is still raining? Kind of neat. The rainbow represents new beginnings. New beginnings mean rebirth. Rebirth creates all of life. Very nicely tied together. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and all your comments supporting this piece. I am glad it resonated for you, and that you enjoyed it. estory

Comment from violet11

Good

This poem is beautiful
I love your choice of words, it is full of hope and colour
Also lots of lovely imagery in this poem
i like how you brought into this poem the mention of angels and used them in a few different lines throughout the poem
As the poem is full of colours anyway I would suggest that maybe you do not need to bring in the word colours into this poem
I also think it may be nice this poem if u also incorporated a image of birds aswell as the angels to compliment it , as birds are lovely to
But overall it is a very good poem that flows well

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the good review and all your comments and suggestions. At some point I will probably edit it, I don't know, maybe I will throw in birds. A phoenix. But this is really a more religious piece, a poem about redemption, grace, and new starts. So I used angels. Wanted a bright, uplifting feel to it estory

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the experience of finding rainbows that open into choirs of angels reaching into the light of the sky; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and all your comments supporting this poem, glad you enjoyed it and found it so uplifting. estory

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Rainbows are passionate, colourful and uplifting, the calm after the storm has relief in a rain blow that blesses the world with vibrancy. Your poem is uplifting and it is a celebration of the rainbow, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks for the excellent review and all your comments supporting the poem. I think you got the message of grace and new beginnings, the uplifting feel I wanted to convey, so I am glad the poem seems to have been crafted correctly. estory

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

No artwork needed for this one. The Creator is the artist and you are the poet that captured it in word picture. Keep up the good work. Good to see you back. I have just recently returned also. Feels good to be home.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the excellent review and all your comments supporting this poem. Glad you enjoyed it, hope you will continue to enjoy my poetry, and I will look for your stuff as well. It's nice to be able to share the creative writing spirit with the members here. estory

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

This is written very beautifully with poise and very graceful, adding angels to highlight the graceful flow. Such lovely words of description you chose. Sherman541

I did not see the pot of gold. (Smiles - joking of course)

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the excellent review and all your wonderful comments supporting this poem, glad it resonated for you and you enjoyed it so much estory

reply by Sherman541 on 08-Mar-2018

you are so welcome :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem with great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the great words you used. It was a joy to read and review! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for the excellent review and all your comments supporting the poem; glad you enjoyed it and found it so uplifting estory