Ah, Beauteous Reflection
Ode to best friend and confidant8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your win for this contest, I enjoyed your words which are humorous and perfect for the contest, a worthy winner, have a great day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Congratulations on your win for this contest, I enjoyed your words which are humorous and perfect for the contest, a worthy winner, have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hi, Dolly! Thank you so much for the great review! So happy you enjoyed it! You, too, have a wonderful day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This mirror poem, As Beauteous Reflection, delivered with an ABCB rhyme scheme, pokes fun at someone with an inflated ego and may even be pointing at the President.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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This mirror poem, As Beauteous Reflection, delivered with an ABCB rhyme scheme, pokes fun at someone with an inflated ego and may even be pointing at the President.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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LOL! And thank you so much for a great review! I tried hard to resist the inspirational temptation but was weak...and failed! Thanks again and have a great day!
Comment from cailinraine8
Really well done and of course the very amusing picture of the supreme narcissist .... lol, he is one individual who seems to observe no flaws whatsoever in his mirror... maybe we can take a lesson after all! Very good rhyming.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Really well done and of course the very amusing picture of the supreme narcissist .... lol, he is one individual who seems to observe no flaws whatsoever in his mirror... maybe we can take a lesson after all! Very good rhyming.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for the great review and comments! I just couldn't help myself when it came to the "inspiration" for this one! LOL! Have a great day
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh delightful. When one has all that's needed, might as well flaunt it. This is a very good poem that I enjoyed reading. No corrections or changes. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Oh delightful. When one has all that's needed, might as well flaunt it. This is a very good poem that I enjoyed reading. No corrections or changes. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review! So happy that you enjoyed!
Comment from Katie Solis
Your first two stanzas were perfect. I then had some problems with word choice and flow, stanza three "in flaunt of each our moves" I can guess at different connotations to this line, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. Stanza four is kind of a mouthful and breaks the flow: "when loud, we 'laud in cheer", maybe Loudly applauding in cheer. The fifth stanza is a little wordy. You finished strong in your last stanza. I like the context and premise of what you wrote. There was some good insight, and a lot of fun to your poem. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Your first two stanzas were perfect. I then had some problems with word choice and flow, stanza three "in flaunt of each our moves" I can guess at different connotations to this line, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. Stanza four is kind of a mouthful and breaks the flow: "when loud, we 'laud in cheer", maybe Loudly applauding in cheer. The fifth stanza is a little wordy. You finished strong in your last stanza. I like the context and premise of what you wrote. There was some good insight, and a lot of fun to your poem. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for review of my poem! It was a fun one to write! Have a great day and thanks again!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written Mirror Poem writing for the prompt entry. You used very cute and descriptive words that seemed to be in limerick form almost! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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This is a very cute and well written Mirror Poem writing for the prompt entry. You used very cute and descriptive words that seemed to be in limerick form almost! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for the great review, Terri! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Henry King
This poem kept a smile on my face throughout the reading. The end rhyme scheme is very good. The internal rhyme is excellent. And, I will not say anything about the dedication, because it is self-evident with all that self-confidence ...
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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This poem kept a smile on my face throughout the reading. The end rhyme scheme is very good. The internal rhyme is excellent. And, I will not say anything about the dedication, because it is self-evident with all that self-confidence ...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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So glad you enjoyed this one! I couldn't resist! Thanks so much for the great review!
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you are welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the irony of making this ode to Trump and his popularity, personality though does not reflect on mirror truly but we love ourselves too much to love him; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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This speaks the irony of making this ode to Trump and his popularity, personality though does not reflect on mirror truly but we love ourselves too much to love him; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for the 5 star review of my entry for the "Mirror Poem" contest. It was a fun one to write and hoped it would give all a little chuckle. Thanks again!
