Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Exciting day I'm sure the picture is so unique to your words and I love it and I see we share third place thank you for being there in the same level with me

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018

How lovely Mary. We are on the same page. Happy Easter. Love JenXxx

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

a hu? Sure thing! But it sure is a funny thought and sure makes a good poem and third line, for suree, jen! I love it! What a sense of humor you have! wonderful! Tony

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thank you so much. Tony

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu about the theme recently married, Love Me Tender, uses seventeen syllables and alludes to a Vegas wedding administered by The King. Neat.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thanks for your great revue.

Comment from apky

Excellent

Does he still do the wedding ceremones?
At any rate you chose the perfect artwork and I could almost
hear Elvis keeping quiet about being nothin' but a hound dog...

Excellent piece, and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018

There are several Elvis's marrying people in Vegas. Thanks for the review.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Ah, yes, Vegas wedding chapels and Elvis. I like the jaiunty tone of this senyru and the novelty of your rhymes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018

Many thanks.