Flames of Glory
Fall, a symbol of death, is nature at its most beautiful.22 total reviews
Comment from nartoonla
Hello, Indeed and yet keeps one wondering... Deep as one reflects... Well done! Thanks again for the review ... corrected as you suggested. And for that a hearty thanks to you.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Hello, Indeed and yet keeps one wondering... Deep as one reflects... Well done! Thanks again for the review ... corrected as you suggested. And for that a hearty thanks to you.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your review. Your poem looks pretty.
Comment from F. Wehr3
A beautiful death, lol? Sounds pretty good. Congrats on your contest win. I missed the voting, but I thought this was a worthy choice.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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A beautiful death, lol? Sounds pretty good. Congrats on your contest win. I missed the voting, but I thought this was a worthy choice.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about death, Flames of Glory, has the correct syllable count and suggests that we too will be given a beautiful end with awesome splendor. Hope so.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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This 5-7-5 about death, Flames of Glory, has the correct syllable count and suggests that we too will be given a beautiful end with awesome splendor. Hope so.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I hope so, too. Thanks, Bill.
Comment from apky
Good question - what indeed?
I love the brilliant-coloured artwork too.
Keep it up. I'm afraid I don't have the expertise to review your poem
in a structurally helpful way. But I hope knowing I enjoyed it is just as good.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Good question - what indeed?
I love the brilliant-coloured artwork too.
Keep it up. I'm afraid I don't have the expertise to review your poem
in a structurally helpful way. But I hope knowing I enjoyed it is just as good.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I love that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Comment from RodG
I can see why this poem won the contest. Autumn both literally and figuratively reminds individual man of his mortality and mankind of the consequences of their actions.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I can see why this poem won the contest. Autumn both literally and figuratively reminds individual man of his mortality and mankind of the consequences of their actions.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you for saying that. It is very kind of you.
Comment from cailinraine8
Love this, wonderful idea and expression of faith in what is in store for us in the afterlife! It reminds me of the hymn, "He Loves Me Too".... great job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Love this, wonderful idea and expression of faith in what is in store for us in the afterlife! It reminds me of the hymn, "He Loves Me Too".... great job.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Ogden
I'm pleased to say, "I told you so!"
You're far more clever than you know.
You won this contest fair and square,
You can't deny your talent there.
But thank you for your flattery;
No one knows me like I know me.
Wear those laurels, Debbie Pope,
And many more! (And soon, I hope.)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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I'm pleased to say, "I told you so!"
You're far more clever than you know.
You won this contest fair and square,
You can't deny your talent there.
But thank you for your flattery;
No one knows me like I know me.
Wear those laurels, Debbie Pope,
And many more! (And soon, I hope.)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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This won't go away until I write something. Thanks again.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking 5-7-5. I agree with you Autumn is the most beautiful srason even when it means every leave has to die. God brings glory and honor to the dying leaves. .
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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A very well-written thought-provoking 5-7-5. I agree with you Autumn is the most beautiful srason even when it means every leave has to die. God brings glory and honor to the dying leaves. .
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Gloria ....
You pose a very good question, author and done with the brilliant colours of fall.
I quite enjoyed this one and wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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You pose a very good question, author and done with the brilliant colours of fall.
I quite enjoyed this one and wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Gloria.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
What I so appreciate in your 5/7/5 poetic offering is its spiritual quality. It addresses the question that if God sends off leaves in the autumn - in such a blaze of glory - surely man's "send off" - reward - might be even filled with more glory. Your poetry creates a quiet moment of reflection, and that is, indeed, a gift of any writing. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift...
diane
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Hello!
What I so appreciate in your 5/7/5 poetic offering is its spiritual quality. It addresses the question that if God sends off leaves in the autumn - in such a blaze of glory - surely man's "send off" - reward - might be even filled with more glory. Your poetry creates a quiet moment of reflection, and that is, indeed, a gift of any writing. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift...
diane
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thank you for that wonderful review.
