Dope
Gotta kick the habit11 total reviews
Comment from Katie Solis
Good job on your contest entry. The rhymes worked nicely, and I like the integration of hope, difficult within the rhyme scheme pattern. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Good job on your contest entry. The rhymes worked nicely, and I like the integration of hope, difficult within the rhyme scheme pattern. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Katie for your review
Comment from Boogienights
A powerful statement made with so few words, this is a great 1-6-1 contest entry. Love the image you included and honestly I think this a lot of people can relate to this. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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A powerful statement made with so few words, this is a great 1-6-1 contest entry. Love the image you included and honestly I think this a lot of people can relate to this. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. I like the clear message of hope that this poem conveys. It truly is a habit that requires some help to kick. I like the accompanying artwork. It goes well with this poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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I like this. I like the clear message of hope that this poem conveys. It truly is a habit that requires some help to kick. I like the accompanying artwork. It goes well with this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks fo your great review
Comment from Linda Kay
Good job on this 1-6-1. Sometimes it is really hard to say a lot with so few words, but I think this really reflects the state of mind of someone trying to kick addiction. They need hope to be able to try to change it.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Good job on this 1-6-1. Sometimes it is really hard to say a lot with so few words, but I think this really reflects the state of mind of someone trying to kick addiction. They need hope to be able to try to change it.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your great review
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a very nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest. You used "dope" of course to make this work in rhyme, however it would apply to any habit we want to quit. Can I kick it and cope - and we Hope we can. Good work and good luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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This is a very nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest. You used "dope" of course to make this work in rhyme, however it would apply to any habit we want to quit. Can I kick it and cope - and we Hope we can. Good work and good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your great review
Comment from Debbie Pope
That is a very good entry. You picked a very relevant topic. The rhyming words that you used are perfect. I am just starting to review the poems, but this one is pretty perfect
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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That is a very good entry. You picked a very relevant topic. The rhyming words that you used are perfect. I am just starting to review the poems, but this one is pretty perfect
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind words
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in just 8 words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in just 8 words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from donette1914
very well written and so powerful to get people off of drugs. i thought you did a outstanding job and a nice photo. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read your work
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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very well written and so powerful to get people off of drugs. i thought you did a outstanding job and a nice photo. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read your work
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from nartoonla
You better as life a gift and go out and get it. No one is perfect we both know this as we all are human and make mistakes. Turn a new leaf and if fiction good job! I will pass it on to someone I know. Bravo.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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You better as life a gift and go out and get it. No one is perfect we both know this as we all are human and make mistakes. Turn a new leaf and if fiction good job! I will pass it on to someone I know. Bravo.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from William Ross
Yes, very good on the 1-6-1 good subject matter, I've always heard it takes a dope to take dope, it is a shame so many fall to the i'll say crap. good luck and have a great day
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Yes, very good on the 1-6-1 good subject matter, I've always heard it takes a dope to take dope, it is a shame so many fall to the i'll say crap. good luck and have a great day
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much
