Black Blizzard, White
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "After All is Said and Done"A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty
4 total reviews
Comment from apky
I like you writing style a lot. Added to that, you write about places and people who are totally alien to me and therefore fascinating. You give them excellent characteristics and make the reader fall for them, even the rather lost cases like George:
>>The poor old town drunk, George was found out behind the Post Office huddled in a corner, a bottle in his hands. He had been waiting for someone to let him in as they were wont to do but there was nobody there that day so poor George froze to death doing what George always did. <<
Very enjoyable and your dialogue is great.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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I like you writing style a lot. Added to that, you write about places and people who are totally alien to me and therefore fascinating. You give them excellent characteristics and make the reader fall for them, even the rather lost cases like George:
>>The poor old town drunk, George was found out behind the Post Office huddled in a corner, a bottle in his hands. He had been waiting for someone to let him in as they were wont to do but there was nobody there that day so poor George froze to death doing what George always did. <<
Very enjoyable and your dialogue is great.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate your feedback and just know that even though this is fiction, most of these people were topics of conversations around our old oak table. Thanks again!
Comment from Wetbelly01
Wow!... Beautifully written, beautifully said!... I Like IT!...
Didn't see any problems with it at all...
My compliments on this fine story!
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Wow!... Beautifully written, beautifully said!... I Like IT!...
Didn't see any problems with it at all...
My compliments on this fine story!
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you again WB for your kind reviews of this book. Now I can take it to the experts to see what I need to do but you've been my cheerleader and you don't know how much it's appreciated.
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You're VERY welcome!
And Good Luck!
Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is an interesting story .I really enjoyed this. I was in the army 10 1/2 yrs. I went all around the world. I cab relate to your story. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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This is an interesting story .I really enjoyed this. I was in the army 10 1/2 yrs. I went all around the world. I cab relate to your story. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings. Thanks again.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much Trudi for your kind review. I have been pushing this book on here so that I can get some professional help. It's definitely not been edited. I appreciate your input a great deal.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks true ideology, faith; hope and dreams of the Prairie people shine through, as no problem stands for ever, after the dark night morning comes; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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This speaks true ideology, faith; hope and dreams of the Prairie people shine through, as no problem stands for ever, after the dark night morning comes; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your feedback AL, you don't know how much I appreciate it. This book has been an act of love because my children and grandchildren need to know their heritage and it does belong to them but I also would rather have had all my teeth pulled while writing this. Thank you again.
