Comment from Linda Kay

Excellent

As an elementary teacher, this made me laugh. We know that those are the kids who need us the most, but inside we are just human too and have the same thoughts sometimes. Thanks for the humorous words, we need them when our profession is so stressful.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your comments.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

A suprise ending. .I like that. Very well written and it rhymes great, I love the picture with it. I think this will do well in the contest, I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Many Thanks

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This is a nice poem! It's definitely not much of a light-hearted topic, but it has a nice flow to the words.
The teacher could choose to hate the girl, by picking favorites, but instead she chose to be nice. I like teachers like that, LOL.
Great work :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I needed some humor! I enjoyed your fast-paced, rhymed quatrains and your bright presentation. Your punchline was very effective. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Thank you Joan. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

Comment from nartoonla

Excellent

Hello, I enjoyed your little poem which was well done. The surprised ending made me laugh and somewhat understand. Yet poor child needs encouragement and a sensitive friend that can correct what she lacks to understand. But know children can be cruel and need guidance from their teacher which some listen and others ignore. And the problem in the end is up to the individual one. No? Regards la

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

i like your humor, Jenintorre! Let's have some more.

I think I might know that girl's grandma (an in-law). She has really strong genes.

Good luck in the contest.

Don (Ogden)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Thanks Don x

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Thanks Don x

reply by Ogden on 24-Feb-2018

You are very welcome.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written rhyming poem. There is always someone that don't fit in with the rest for one or other reason. It takes just one good Samaritan to draw him/her into the group activities.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Many thanks for reviewing.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

In any of the games. ( start line with lower case'i')

A cute poem and I am sure this is how many kids see themselves. I was never popular in school and people used to make fun of me for reading all the time. Good poem, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

Thanks for your comments and pointing out the error.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Rhyming Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018

Thank you

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Jenin, this is a wonderful poem and the punch line at the end does bring a chuckle from this reader. Have a wonderful weekend my friend. Patricia

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018

Thank you so much Patricia , my friend. You have a good week-end too. X