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Comment from sunao
Oh, why did it have to be you? I'm sorry that you had to go through what you went through. I hope that you know that God knows why this happened to you. I hope that your relationship with God becomes stronger than never before because of this. Thank you so much for sharing and please keep on sharing and expressing yourself. Have a beautiful day!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Oh, why did it have to be you? I'm sorry that you had to go through what you went through. I hope that you know that God knows why this happened to you. I hope that your relationship with God becomes stronger than never before because of this. Thank you so much for sharing and please keep on sharing and expressing yourself. Have a beautiful day!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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for two-year long years after the loss of my son and I 8 months later the suicide of my wife I cursed Christ for letting me wake up every day and then I had an epiphany and started to love what I had Ben left with and even though I lost a son one of those four people was a little girl who today is grown and becomes my fifth daughter that gives me the strength to go on each day
Comment from Henry King
Review by Henry: I ain't a shrink. I see a glimmer. Through a far chink. You're on the way to better. I liked your punch-in-my-gut better. Even while I would like that "One More Chance." Very well done.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Review by Henry: I ain't a shrink. I see a glimmer. Through a far chink. You're on the way to better. I liked your punch-in-my-gut better. Even while I would like that "One More Chance." Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Rganks for this King Henry tje Eifhrh I Am I am ..
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Sugarray77
Way to go on crafting this verse. I know you will obtain the Pulitzer some day. It flowed well and your theme and artwork worked well together. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Way to go on crafting this verse. I know you will obtain the Pulitzer some day. It flowed well and your theme and artwork worked well together. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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one day I grabbed the pin and started to write even though I could care less one day I grabbed a pen and sword to write and was recognized with the statement that this is a beautiful one day I started to write with one day I grabbed a pen and sword to write and was recognized with the statement that this is a beautiful one day I started to write with a statement that this was beautiful International all history thanks talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
The thing is is that we can sit and ask why me, what if I could have or what if I would have done this or that. Eventually, no matter how hard, we have to pick up the pieces. I know it's way harder than it sounds. The thing is are we going to let life take us down or build us up? I know, I know, much harder than done than said. I do hope you are able to find some peace.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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The thing is is that we can sit and ask why me, what if I could have or what if I would have done this or that. Eventually, no matter how hard, we have to pick up the pieces. I know it's way harder than it sounds. The thing is are we going to let life take us down or build us up? I know, I know, much harder than done than said. I do hope you are able to find some peace.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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So true experiencing and people tell me the same thing that you have to move on don't live in the past I don't live in the past but I'll never forget it and I honor my son by bringing it forward and I also am working towards saving lives like he did by talking about the gift of life thanks for your time and review Ricky 10:24 and have a blessed day
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I get it. I still write about my abuse. Even though I struggle some days I also know my writing might help someone. I totally get it
Comment from Edwin Hofert
I have much admiration for people who own their past when their past has been less than perfect. It speaks of strength and character. I know too many people who play down these things as if they never happened. To me they are destined to forget valuable life lessons and are more likely to have them be repeated. Write On!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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I have much admiration for people who own their past when their past has been less than perfect. It speaks of strength and character. I know too many people who play down these things as if they never happened. To me they are destined to forget valuable life lessons and are more likely to have them be repeated. Write On!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Back said when I own up to my past for my mistakes.
I also right and honor my son and talk about the gift of life to try and possibly save a future life someday.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life can throw some hard balls at us Ricky and the trick is to try and pick them up and throw them back. It is hard to do this in your situation. Just remember you have life and try and concentrate of living it as best you can, I hear your pain and freeing yourself from it is the hardest thing to do, but you sound strong, I wish you well, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Life can throw some hard balls at us Ricky and the trick is to try and pick them up and throw them back. It is hard to do this in your situation. Just remember you have life and try and concentrate of living it as best you can, I hear your pain and freeing yourself from it is the hardest thing to do, but you sound strong, I wish you well, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks Dolly and I know that you been there and done that, too...
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks past thoughts: wish once more to dance eerie dance 'Shadows of Substance'; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This speaks past thoughts: wish once more to dance eerie dance 'Shadows of Substance'; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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thanks ever so much our Al Creator. Dr Ricky 1024
