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Six Stars For The Win!

A Little Writing Competition Humor...Maybe

33 total reviews 
Comment from Joy Graham
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is priceless! Congratulations on achieving a second place in this competition. I somehow missed yours until just now. You make many good points and show the inner workings of my own mind when considering entering a contest lol! I haven't entered a member run contest in a very long time until recently. I entered the fairy tale with a twist contest by accident. I thought Robyn told me she set up a contest so jumped in only to find I made a huge error. To my surprise, I went through all the emotions you listed in this poem and was gobsmacked to win. So, maybe my poetry isn't so bad after all??? It always hurts when I only get one vote which was my own. Woe is me.

Well done, you!

Sincerely Joy xx

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hi Joy!
    I am honored by your review! Thank you so much! This is not my usual fare.
    True story: I had no idea one could vote for oneself in these contests. The first one I entered this year, I did not even consider voting for myself. If I had, I would have won/shared first place with another writer! Lesson learned...maybe

    Thank you again!
    And you write wonderful verses!
    diane
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This free verse, Six Stars for the Win, is the winner of the contest. The pretender won again for some unknown reason. This was
Inspired
Energizing
Healthy
Joyful
Life-affirming
Soul-redeeming
Meaningful

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Aw, Bill...

    Much too kind. I did enjoy penning this verse, but it was a bit over the top!
    Thank you for your kind review and vote of confidence.

    diane
Comment from DragonSkulls
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Excellent write, Diane. The only one in the contest that, besides my own, haha, deserved to win. The best line was "I stridently reject the notion that blind competitions are indeed blind." Oh how true those words are. Loved your take on the contest. Have a great rest of your weekend, D.

;)
Ron

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hi Ron!
    Woah!
    Yours was poetic and artistic.
    Mine was obnoxious and over the top... maybe... :)
    Still recovering from the snafu and drama...
    But blind competitions are definitely not blind.

    Be well,
    diane
Comment from Chrissy710
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Mrs KT. Well done and we can all identify with this free verse LOL . i enjoyed your humour and well constructed free verse that said it all Good luck in the contest should do well Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hello Christine,
    Thank you for your thoughtful and exceptional review. I am honored!
    Not my usual fare; that's for certain!

    diane
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good entry for the Competition writing prompt.
Well said and you had some fun with this one.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hello Sharon,
    Thank you! I appreciate your complimentary review!

    diane
Comment from poetwatch
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You must have an "in" with the writers of FanStory your writing, shall we say, is very free, interesting, or should I say not Ho-Hum. I like your freestyle. This is a very good entry. Yet, you say you won four member pumps in a row? All I ever got was two. What's your secret?

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hey poetwatch!
    I definitely do not have an "in" with any of the writers on FanStory, but I have met some wonderful folks here.
    Thank you for your exceptional review of my work; it means a great deal!

    diane
Comment from MelB
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This is a fun and creative poem and contest entry on FanStory competitions. Nice use of adjectives to describe the anticipation before reviews and the joy after receiving good reviews.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hi MelB
    So pleased you enjoyed the humor; not my usual offering.
    Thank you for your complimentary review!

    diane
reply by MelB on 20-Feb-2018
    You're welcome. Always fun to change things up sometimes:)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is amazing. We've all been there, right? No, I won't do a contest. It seems the same people win, blah blah blah. But here we go, we enter and we wait. After all you'll never know if you don't try.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Hi ExperiencingLiphe!
    You honor me with your exceptional review!
    Keep writing - regardless of who wins!

    Take Care,
    diane
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent
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No fair! You seem to be getting all the Lucky Leprechaun Certs, so now I know where they all went. Hrmmpppph. ;-) Kidding. Great entry, wonderful free verse, it's compelling, uhm moving, genuine, and you know the routine.

A most clever entry and best wishes to you in the contest author. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Hello Gloria!
    Thank you for the sweet and humorous review; I needed it!

    Best Wishes!
Comment from Shawlyn
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Hi.
I enjoyed these verses quite a lot. As well as being humorous, It also echoes what others feel about competitions and the waste of time they are; until, that one bit of recognition comes. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Hi Shawlyn!
    Much appreciation for your thoughtful review!
    Thank you!