Ever My Truelove
A Valentine's Day Acrostic for My Husband18 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
What a lovely last name! Thank you for sharing your pride in this Valentine for your husband. I admired your use of the acrostic form for your poem. Best wishes in the contest and here's to decades more of "true love"- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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What a lovely last name! Thank you for sharing your pride in this Valentine for your husband. I admired your use of the acrostic form for your poem. Best wishes in the contest and here's to decades more of "true love"- Joan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hello Joan,
Ah...acrostics and I have always struggled, but I surely appreciated your thoughtful review!
thank you!
diane
Comment from Winslow
Dear KT,
Ah, such true feelings of love for your husband penned here. An excellent romantic poem done as an acrostic.
What is your favorite poetry form?
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Dear KT,
Ah, such true feelings of love for your husband penned here. An excellent romantic poem done as an acrostic.
What is your favorite poetry form?
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Hello Winslow!
Thank you for your positive review.
My favorite form is tetractys. On my bucket list is to write a book of tetractys poems...
Much appreciation,
diane
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think that this is a good entry for the Valintine's Poetry writing prompt.
Well done, well said. A lovely verse for your husband.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I think that this is a good entry for the Valintine's Poetry writing prompt.
Well done, well said. A lovely verse for your husband.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hello Sharon,
Thank you for appreciating my verse!
diane
Comment from Rasmine
Good poem. I do have one suggestion though. That you cut the lines down that run into two lines, so that the acoustic can be read easier.
Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Good poem. I do have one suggestion though. That you cut the lines down that run into two lines, so that the acoustic can be read easier.
Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hello Rasmine,
Glad you enjoyed.
Perhaps you are reading my poem on a phone? On my monitor, I indented the last word of the longer four lines so that TRUELOVE can be readily seen, and nothing "runs into two lines."
Thank you again!
diane
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No, not a phone, just how it comes out on my screen.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I love the line about how people attempted to doubt or destroy your love. We had someone tell us we'd end up in divorce before we ever got married. We laughed it off. But I was so blown away this person told my husband that to his face. Like seriously? I love this. Great job
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I love the line about how people attempted to doubt or destroy your love. We had someone tell us we'd end up in divorce before we ever got married. We laughed it off. But I was so blown away this person told my husband that to his face. Like seriously? I love this. Great job
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hello Again!
Thanks ever so much.
It's been quite the ride! Darn lucky!
diane
Comment from doggymad
Congratulations on the best part of 40 years together.
It is wonderful that you can write such a beautiful poem and know that each word is crafted to proclaim and celebrate your love for each other
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Congratulations on the best part of 40 years together.
It is wonderful that you can write such a beautiful poem and know that each word is crafted to proclaim and celebrate your love for each other
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi Freda,
It's been a wonderful almost forty years.
Gone by far too quickly!
Thank you for your kind review!
diane
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a lovely Valentine's Day acrostic poem KT. It is filled with tender care for your husband, Mr. Truelove. That is so sweet. I'm sure it has been a source of joy and a reminder of what is truly important in life.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely Valentine's Day acrostic poem KT. It is filled with tender care for your husband, Mr. Truelove. That is so sweet. I'm sure it has been a source of joy and a reminder of what is truly important in life.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi Janet!
Thanks ever so much for your thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is very sweet and I am sure your true love will appreciate it. I just read your notes - your last name is Truelove - love it:)
Great acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is very sweet and I am sure your true love will appreciate it. I just read your notes - your last name is Truelove - love it:)
Great acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi Teresa,
I am pretty sure he would appreciate it, but he has pneumonia at the moment, and I have yet to share it with him!
My last name...who would have thought!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from TPAC
Great conveyance, words able to generate the inner spirit in us, a deposit of to be cherished views, I found touching in statement. A pleasing journey to read.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Great conveyance, words able to generate the inner spirit in us, a deposit of to be cherished views, I found touching in statement. A pleasing journey to read.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello TPAC!
So pleased you enjoyed! It's been a wonderful run!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Valentine's acrostic poem. So many people try their best to ruin other's love relationships because they cannot have the same happiness they see with you.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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A very well-written Valentine's acrostic poem. So many people try their best to ruin other's love relationships because they cannot have the same happiness they see with you.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Sandra,
This is my first acrostic is years, but I couldn't resist with a name like mine!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
diane
