Perennials of War
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Comment from Sasha
This is another great chapter with a superb explanation of the problem between Shana and Anderson developing a relationship. The nurses were foolish and rude to gossip about Anderson and I understand Shana's feeling of not being in his social group. Clearly, this is not a problem for Anderson and he will have to find a way to address this issue with her. I am sorry I have taken so long to get to this post, I am having my eye exam tomorrow and, hopefully will have glasses within a day two.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is another great chapter with a superb explanation of the problem between Shana and Anderson developing a relationship. The nurses were foolish and rude to gossip about Anderson and I understand Shana's feeling of not being in his social group. Clearly, this is not a problem for Anderson and he will have to find a way to address this issue with her. I am sorry I have taken so long to get to this post, I am having my eye exam tomorrow and, hopefully will have glasses within a day two.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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I am do happy that you are back and feeling like review. I so missed your insight. After I review some more, I will post.
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, Barbara!
This is a well-written chapter in which I spotted no spags.
Shana was upset after hearing the nurses talk. Life can be complicated and she's young and emotional but things will come right.
Nicole
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hi, Barbara!
This is a well-written chapter in which I spotted no spags.
Shana was upset after hearing the nurses talk. Life can be complicated and she's young and emotional but things will come right.
Nicole
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I heard a rumor that Anderson gently takes care of the nurses. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Realist101
Hi Barbara...What impressive dialogue! I'm always amazed by those who can 'tell' a story like this. I enjoyed the part where the elderly had to leave. I have cataracts and am due for surgery and always try to get home before dark because of the lights. :/ No fair. Scary. But as a victim of gossip I can really appreciate this chapter. S.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hi Barbara...What impressive dialogue! I'm always amazed by those who can 'tell' a story like this. I enjoyed the part where the elderly had to leave. I have cataracts and am due for surgery and always try to get home before dark because of the lights. :/ No fair. Scary. But as a victim of gossip I can really appreciate this chapter. S.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the kind and realistic review.
Comment from Jay Squires
An excellent chapter, Barbara. I like the subtle tension between Anderson and Shana, especially the way you use Hannah as a sort of lens.
A solid 6 chapter.
He's not be from around here." [I'm assuming an intended colloquialism here. Correct?]
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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An excellent chapter, Barbara. I like the subtle tension between Anderson and Shana, especially the way you use Hannah as a sort of lens.
A solid 6 chapter.
He's not be from around here." [I'm assuming an intended colloquialism here. Correct?]
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Oh so true. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from mbroyles2
Looks like Drew is getting ready to face Shana's father.
Good for him!
You have presented this romance inside a suspenseful drama.
Not always an easy thing to do, but you've done it well.
I've enjoyed reading it.
Michael
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Looks like Drew is getting ready to face Shana's father.
Good for him!
You have presented this romance inside a suspenseful drama.
Not always an easy thing to do, but you've done it well.
I've enjoyed reading it.
Michael
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Michael, I really appreciate hearing from you. Thank you.l
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Barbara
The 'Cinderella' position of Shana and the handsome billionaire she doesn't feel would honestly find anything attractive about her is romance fiction at its finest! Especially after she hears all the things the nurses, etc. are saying about him. Shana obviously feels being pragmatic is the best way to keep her heart from being broken. I'm really rooting for this couple. Excellent chapter.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hi, Barbara
The 'Cinderella' position of Shana and the handsome billionaire she doesn't feel would honestly find anything attractive about her is romance fiction at its finest! Especially after she hears all the things the nurses, etc. are saying about him. Shana obviously feels being pragmatic is the best way to keep her heart from being broken. I'm really rooting for this couple. Excellent chapter.
:) Bev
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I'm cheering for them too. I hope they can pull it off. Thank you for the kind review.
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Always a pleasure, Barbara. :) Bev
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Barbara;
Another great chapter and a good explanation of the problem of a nice Jewish girl dating outside of her faith. Too many people think this is just old-fashioned, but do not see the issue has to do with bloodlines, religion, and tradition.
Great job and I look forward to more,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Hi, Barbara;
Another great chapter and a good explanation of the problem of a nice Jewish girl dating outside of her faith. Too many people think this is just old-fashioned, but do not see the issue has to do with bloodlines, religion, and tradition.
Great job and I look forward to more,
~patty~
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Thank you for understanding. I received a review pretty much stating that Shana needs to tell her dad to get lost. I tried to explain, gently, that Shana can't do that because of the way she was brought up.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb fun to read the dialogue between the nursed
Nurses should know not to gossip I have learned its like grape vine when it gets to the end of the grape vine isn't the same story.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hi Barb fun to read the dialogue between the nursed
Nurses should know not to gossip I have learned its like grape vine when it gets to the end of the grape vine isn't the same story.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Oh so true. Your wisdom shines through even with reviews. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from George Jr
I like the way this is written. Its easy to follow, very descriptive and allows for a connection to the characters. Well done, thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I like the way this is written. Its easy to follow, very descriptive and allows for a connection to the characters. Well done, thank you for posting.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Thank you for the work. I've written a couple poems but not yet ready to attempt a book. I applaud the commitment.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That would be so upsetting for anyone who overheard gossip like that. Poor Shana. I think she will have to start developing a thicker skin. Now what is Anderson up to? Something that Shana isn't too happy about, whatever it is. Excellent part again, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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That would be so upsetting for anyone who overheard gossip like that. Poor Shana. I think she will have to start developing a thicker skin. Now what is Anderson up to? Something that Shana isn't too happy about, whatever it is. Excellent part again, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the encouragement. I think Benjamin will add to the suspense.
