Bittersweet Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "A Break in the Case"She's back ready for revenge.
8 total reviews
Comment from Katie Solis
That was thrilling and suspenseful. There was one line where you wrote "retards is running", where is should be are. Other than that everything looked really good, flowed nicely, and left the reader in anticipation. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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That was thrilling and suspenseful. There was one line where you wrote "retards is running", where is should be are. Other than that everything looked really good, flowed nicely, and left the reader in anticipation. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You're right it should be are not is.
Thank you again for your kind review, and your encouragement they mean a lot to me, take care.
Comment from royowen
Well, thisviscavturn up for the books, Aunt Sheri, what an amazing thing indeed. This is quite a complex and clever plot my friend. The police, of course, have already figured it out, so there's a question in why she needs to "talk" to Rachel, well done good episode, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Well, thisviscavturn up for the books, Aunt Sheri, what an amazing thing indeed. This is quite a complex and clever plot my friend. The police, of course, have already figured it out, so there's a question in why she needs to "talk" to Rachel, well done good episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review and your encouraging words. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Thank you again for your help and support, take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Exciting stuff and a great place to end it. Don't take too long in posting the last chapter! So Aunt Sheri is a twin and survived somehow. I guess we'll learn how she did it.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Exciting stuff and a great place to end it. Don't take too long in posting the last chapter! So Aunt Sheri is a twin and survived somehow. I guess we'll learn how she did it.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your great review and all of your support. I didn't realize that tieing up all my loose ends would be a chapter in itself. I'm just glad no one is to upset with me for fibbing.
Thanks again for all your support, take care.
Comment from apky
This chapter is pretty intense.
I now worry about Rachel and can only hope that she doesn't get hurt by Sheri. On the other hand I'm not even sure that Sheri is that dangerous. I may need to go back and read previous chapters again.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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This chapter is pretty intense.
I now worry about Rachel and can only hope that she doesn't get hurt by Sheri. On the other hand I'm not even sure that Sheri is that dangerous. I may need to go back and read previous chapters again.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Yes, Rachel is in some major hot water. This is the only chapter I mentioned Sheri by name. I brought her up in a previous chapter, briefly as Emma's mother saying she said she had to run an errand and never came back. Chapter 2 I believe when Joe was questioning Bonnie at the hospital. That's the only time she's been mentioned.
Thank you again for all your help and support it means a lot to me.
Comment from Natali Holden
Earlier on in the book, I was thinking that maybe Rachel had a twin, I guess it was her mom instead. She seemed kind of like she was trying to protect Rachel earlier when she learned the police thought it was Rachel, so I'm wondering about her threatening her with the gun now. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Looking forward to the conclusion! Keep up the amazing writing!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Earlier on in the book, I was thinking that maybe Rachel had a twin, I guess it was her mom instead. She seemed kind of like she was trying to protect Rachel earlier when she learned the police thought it was Rachel, so I'm wondering about her threatening her with the gun now. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Looking forward to the conclusion! Keep up the amazing writing!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review and your wonderful words. It wasn't Rachel's mom Jeanie who threatened her with a gun it was the Aunt, Sheri. I hadn't written about Jeanie since early in the book then threw her and Sheri in together at the end so I can see where this might be confusing. Maybe I should say something about Jeanie a few chapters back, kind of reintroduce her to help clear the confusion.
Thanks again for all your support, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Looks like Rachel is going to find out the hard way why Jerry said to be careful. Either that or the ol' last second saving from the beast. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Looks like Rachel is going to find out the hard way why Jerry said to be careful. Either that or the ol' last second saving from the beast. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your kind review. You think they'll be a hail mary of sorts that'll save her from her demise? Could be.
Thank you again for all your support, take care.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Well Mistydawn
I must say you know how to put in suspense by having Rachel's Aunt Sheri the killer and if she is why in the world would make her do the murders,
There must be a logical reason.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Well Mistydawn
I must say you know how to put in suspense by having Rachel's Aunt Sheri the killer and if she is why in the world would make her do the murders,
There must be a logical reason.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic review and for all the high praise. Reviews like that make all the hard work with while.
I know you've been anxiously waiting to find out, so if you want I can message you the ending. I think then you'll understand why I did what I did with the split.
Thank you so much for all your support, encouragement, friendship it means so much to me, take care.
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No I rather read the ending of your story that have me in suspense.
Gert
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A good chapter and a very fine stopping off point.
but that house it holds so many precious memories, - I would suggest deleting 'it' from here to have a smoother delivery.
They're still claiming its Jeanie's - it's.
she punches in a few numbers - should start with a capital here.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Hi there,
A good chapter and a very fine stopping off point.
but that house it holds so many precious memories, - I would suggest deleting 'it' from here to have a smoother delivery.
They're still claiming its Jeanie's - it's.
she punches in a few numbers - should start with a capital here.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your helpful review. Close but no cookie yet again. At least it wasn't two pages full like it has been in the past.
Thanks again for your helpful review and continuous support, take care.
