Free Spirit
1-9-1 poetry4 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
This creative 1-9-1 splendidly matches its delightful illustration. I like the way the center line is one definition of the phrase "Real Love" within which it is sandwiched. The innocent young girl knows in her heart that no bird was meant to be caged, just as no woman was meant to be "owned" in a relationship, and no human being was meant to be a serf. This bird will enjoy its freedom to soar; yet, it may return to a nearby tree to show her liberator some appreciation, just by doing so. It takes a special kind of heart to put a post like this together, and your friends here know you have it. Superb.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This creative 1-9-1 splendidly matches its delightful illustration. I like the way the center line is one definition of the phrase "Real Love" within which it is sandwiched. The innocent young girl knows in her heart that no bird was meant to be caged, just as no woman was meant to be "owned" in a relationship, and no human being was meant to be a serf. This bird will enjoy its freedom to soar; yet, it may return to a nearby tree to show her liberator some appreciation, just by doing so. It takes a special kind of heart to put a post like this together, and your friends here know you have it. Superb.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Mike, we have had this dicussion before....ya can't write a review better then the poem!...you know me well. Spot on with the review. Thank you dear friend....awww and 6 stars? :-)))) ( me, smiling big)
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You are most welcome, Susan. YOU wrote it -- straight from that warm heart of yours. I just responded to what I felt while reading it. I still had a Six for this week, so I gave it where it was well deserved. :))
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your selection of evocative, single syllable words and your capturing deep feeling in the middle line. The artwork you selected is perfectly parallel to your reflection as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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I admired your selection of evocative, single syllable words and your capturing deep feeling in the middle line. The artwork you selected is perfectly parallel to your reflection as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you Joan for this review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review! have a wonderful day!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful love poem, youthful free spirits love with their hearts taking them to great heights, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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A beautiful love poem, youthful free spirits love with their hearts taking them to great heights, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Dear, I do appreciate the kind words. :-)
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a precious 1-9-1 poem. I am sorry but that drawing calls for the word precious. Sweet, sweet poem. If we could only all soar. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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What a precious 1-9-1 poem. I am sorry but that drawing calls for the word precious. Sweet, sweet poem. If we could only all soar. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you again! Lucky me!...sweet reviews! :-)
