The Man
Breaking point of men8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tetractys, The Man, set up correctly, seems to lean toward the humorous aspects of prostate problems. Yes, they are quite the rage.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
This tetractys, The Man, set up correctly, seems to lean toward the humorous aspects of prostate problems. Yes, they are quite the rage.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thanks Bill. All we can do is grin and bare it.
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! Good word choices in your entry and I love the way you've chosen to illustrate it. Not sure if the contest is over, but much luck in it with this great write. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
LOL! Good word choices in your entry and I love the way you've chosen to illustrate it. Not sure if the contest is over, but much luck in it with this great write. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you Marilyn. It's just something that is. :(
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the need, advice for practice to the breaking point for perfection; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR'
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
This speaks the need, advice for practice to the breaking point for perfection; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR'
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you Al.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun Tetractys. A man never shows fear and stand steadfast against any danger that may come their way. The only.thing they will not stand still for, is when the doctor puts on a surgical glove.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
A very well-written fun Tetractys. A man never shows fear and stand steadfast against any danger that may come their way. The only.thing they will not stand still for, is when the doctor puts on a surgical glove.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sandra. No man likes that.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me laugh! Of course many of us have been there! But in the end we cannot run from the enevitable, our bodies don't last forever, love the artwork and the sentiments behind this write, good luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
This made me laugh! Of course many of us have been there! But in the end we cannot run from the enevitable, our bodies don't last forever, love the artwork and the sentiments behind this write, good luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks Dolly. Yeh you're right we all get it in the end.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Tetractys poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I have heard most men feel that way at the doctors office! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
This is a very well written Tetractys poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I have heard most men feel that way at the doctors office! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks Teri
Comment from c_lucas
Buy your doctor an extra large jar of Vaseline before he starts. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
Buy your doctor an extra large jar of Vaseline before he starts. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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All they need is a dab to get the job done. Thanks.
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Kind of like Brylcreem. "A little dab will do you." LOL
Comment from Gloria ....
Well as a woman it's rather difficult to feel too terribly bad for you men, as the old acrylic glove is a regular occurrence for us femalians. Nonetheless, this is a blast and a great good fun for Tetractys contest.
Let us know how it goes. ;-)
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
Well as a woman it's rather difficult to feel too terribly bad for you men, as the old acrylic glove is a regular occurrence for us femalians. Nonetheless, this is a blast and a great good fun for Tetractys contest.
Let us know how it goes. ;-)
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you Gloria. I'll try to keep my head held high for deep down I cry.