Doris
You're never too old.11 total reviews
Comment from mbroyles2
You're exactly right.
Love knows no time line or age limit and this quick 50 word dribble points that out clearly.
Reminds me if my grand parents.
Great work!
Michael
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You're exactly right.
Love knows no time line or age limit and this quick 50 word dribble points that out clearly.
Reminds me if my grand parents.
Great work!
Michael
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from zanya
How endearing - tasting the joys of life and living whatever our chronological age - life's joy is not necessarily diminished with the passing of time ..great
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How endearing - tasting the joys of life and living whatever our chronological age - life's joy is not necessarily diminished with the passing of time ..great
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from frogbook
In fifty words you managed to scrounge up the fountain of youth-lol. Very sweet and cute and education for youngins to know about us old folks. Good job and best of luck.
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In fifty words you managed to scrounge up the fountain of youth-lol. Very sweet and cute and education for youngins to know about us old folks. Good job and best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from charlene7190
What a sweet commentary. I enjoyed the fact that it's not just the physical side of a relationship, although breakfast says a lot. It's the connection, the emotional side that's just as important. (Although breakfast is right there at the top, lol).
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What a sweet commentary. I enjoyed the fact that it's not just the physical side of a relationship, although breakfast says a lot. It's the connection, the emotional side that's just as important. (Although breakfast is right there at the top, lol).
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This 50-word dribble, Doris, has a straight forward dialogue that is so sugary sweet I may need to gargle with mustard. Actually, a nice write.
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This 50-word dribble, Doris, has a straight forward dialogue that is so sugary sweet I may need to gargle with mustard. Actually, a nice write.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
smiles author
love the picture of the elderly couple, it reminds me of me and my hubby; in just 50 words you told even if a loving couple are up in age can still
rekindle their passion.
Gert
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smiles author
love the picture of the elderly couple, it reminds me of me and my hubby; in just 50 words you told even if a loving couple are up in age can still
rekindle their passion.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from mvbrooks
Sweet slice-of-life story reminding the reader that the outer body may show signs of aging, but inside we all remain human and in need of positive relationships.
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Sweet slice-of-life story reminding the reader that the outer body may show signs of aging, but inside we all remain human and in need of positive relationships.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Dan Diego
Reviewed in the blind. These 50-word stories are pretty good. Yours is a fine example of storytelling in such a short space. I think your title, art, and narrative do an excellent job in telling the story of two aging lovers. Good luck in the booth. I think this could resonate with many of the voters.
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Reviewed in the blind. These 50-word stories are pretty good. Yours is a fine example of storytelling in such a short space. I think your title, art, and narrative do an excellent job in telling the story of two aging lovers. Good luck in the booth. I think this could resonate with many of the voters.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this entry in the Dribble 50words Flash Fiction contest. You did a great job of conveying a rejuvenated character and his embracing life again. Good job.
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I love this entry in the Dribble 50words Flash Fiction contest. You did a great job of conveying a rejuvenated character and his embracing life again. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Doris: Truer words are never spoken. You're never too old. If there is one thing on earth that is as old as our God; that one thing is love. That's because, "GOD IS LOVE." We can have love all of our lives. And love is the one and only thing we can take with us when we go back to the love from where we came. Where else but to our God can that possibly be? So.... then if our God: who created us in: "His Image: In His Likeness." is never too old...."SELAH." Pause: Think," about that for a moment. I love your attitude concerning human age. May yours grow, and grow, and grow, and grow. I love you, Doris. rhonnie69.
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Hello Doris: Truer words are never spoken. You're never too old. If there is one thing on earth that is as old as our God; that one thing is love. That's because, "GOD IS LOVE." We can have love all of our lives. And love is the one and only thing we can take with us when we go back to the love from where we came. Where else but to our God can that possibly be? So.... then if our God: who created us in: "His Image: In His Likeness." is never too old...."SELAH." Pause: Think," about that for a moment. I love your attitude concerning human age. May yours grow, and grow, and grow, and grow. I love you, Doris. rhonnie69.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
