Random Belief
Discussing belief63 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
You said it, friend. The line about--well, the entire second verse about how religions are born and why is just dead on.
I hate it, because who wouldn't want the comfort of believing something bigger was looking out for us? But, shit, truth is freedom. I just learned that.
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You said it, friend. The line about--well, the entire second verse about how religions are born and why is just dead on.
I hate it, because who wouldn't want the comfort of believing something bigger was looking out for us? But, shit, truth is freedom. I just learned that.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Ella Gott
Very nice! This was a very talented write, and it seemed almost flawless. You are really really gifted and congratulations on being so highly ranked! I can only hope I will be where you are someday!
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Very nice! This was a very talented write, and it seemed almost flawless. You are really really gifted and congratulations on being so highly ranked! I can only hope I will be where you are someday!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written acrostic poem about the words random belief. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written acrostic poem about the words random belief. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I love the subject for your acrostic.
You take one that is often done, Belief, and you add a different element to it "random".
In it, you approach the idea of having a reason for the belief, and call out to the believer to look for the purpose behind it.
Great job,
Rhonda
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I love the subject for your acrostic.
You take one that is often done, Belief, and you add a different element to it "random".
In it, you approach the idea of having a reason for the belief, and call out to the believer to look for the purpose behind it.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I think you did a good job in crafting your verse, but I must admit to noticing a difference between the first and second stanza. I was cheering you on during the beginning, but struggled through the second with all of the big meanings. You lost me a little. Thanks.
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I think you did a good job in crafting your verse, but I must admit to noticing a difference between the first and second stanza. I was cheering you on during the beginning, but struggled through the second with all of the big meanings. You lost me a little. Thanks.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Lori Duff Writes
This type of poem is difficult to pull off while sounding natural. You did a great job making the words flow and not feeling forced. The ideas are interesting.
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This type of poem is difficult to pull off while sounding natural. You did a great job making the words flow and not feeling forced. The ideas are interesting.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from frierajac
This is the best poem I've seen today. I especially like the final stanza. It relates to
some tapes and a book I am rereading. This seems to describe a problem with the culture we are living in at the moment.
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This is the best poem I've seen today. I especially like the final stanza. It relates to
some tapes and a book I am rereading. This seems to describe a problem with the culture we are living in at the moment.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Tom;
Thank you for sharing your lovely acrostic for the contest. Within your lines, you not only spell the words, but you give meaning to the beliefs we all hold onto.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Hi, Tom;
Thank you for sharing your lovely acrostic for the contest. Within your lines, you not only spell the words, but you give meaning to the beliefs we all hold onto.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from fastdigits
A beautiful Acrostic poem steeped in artistic phrasing that dances down the page in poetic splendor that perhaps encapsulates a bit of the world and the thinking that is poorly missed in especially that bread of mortal called a politician.
Well done and good luck
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A beautiful Acrostic poem steeped in artistic phrasing that dances down the page in poetic splendor that perhaps encapsulates a bit of the world and the thinking that is poorly missed in especially that bread of mortal called a politician.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello EASYEVERETT1: Yes. Yes. Let us discuss belief. Let us start here: "For God so loved the world; that He gave His only begotten Son, that whoever, BELIEVES, in Him should not perish but have everlasting life." Isn't that wonderful good news, EASYEVERETTI?
What our Bible says happened at the cross: I wasn't there: I didn't see; but I believe. I believe because I walk by, "FAITH," not by sight. Faith, to me, is belief. Belief is unconditional trust.
So I trust in our God in every part of my life: and I lean, "NOT," upon my own understanding.
For I BELIEVE, that our God's Infinite Wisdom, directs the way of my path. Love: rhonnie69.
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Hello EASYEVERETT1: Yes. Yes. Let us discuss belief. Let us start here: "For God so loved the world; that He gave His only begotten Son, that whoever, BELIEVES, in Him should not perish but have everlasting life." Isn't that wonderful good news, EASYEVERETTI?
What our Bible says happened at the cross: I wasn't there: I didn't see; but I believe. I believe because I walk by, "FAITH," not by sight. Faith, to me, is belief. Belief is unconditional trust.
So I trust in our God in every part of my life: and I lean, "NOT," upon my own understanding.
For I BELIEVE, that our God's Infinite Wisdom, directs the way of my path. Love: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
