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Morning's cradle...

Time's daily journey.

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Roy, morning is a new start everyday...God has made it a gift...and with each morning...brings it's own beauty...I love your poem my sweet friend...perfect picture...very well written...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Linda,, for these gracious words and gentle review, blessings, Roy
reply by l.raven on 13-Feb-2018
    your so welcome Roy...blessing my sweet friend...xxoo love
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul ..." Many poets write of the hope that is born anew each day. A true gift of God to we poor souls still trying to make sense of his universe. Beautiful mountain/valley metaphor, Roy. We'll done!. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thanks Nancy, for these wonderful words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from charlene7190
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Very insightful words. Well written and I must admit I read it twice. The last sentence says volumes and I will take that away with me, that we have been "gifted" the depth of life's mystique. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thanks Charlene for these sage words and great review review, blessings, Roy
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Roy,
This is a fine rhymed poem with wonderful imagery
of the magic and mystique of morning's cradle
There is always a light for those who look up
Very nicely done
RS

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thanks Robert, for these splendid words and wonderful review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I love how expound upon various verses of the Bible. I always check because it is crucial to understanding your poem. I love the extended metaphor of morn's cradle. Each day we can start anew. That is quite a gift. I am pondering photo choice. Obviously I am missing something. I remain your biggest fan.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks Debbie, for these splendid words and wonderful review, my browsers been playing up unfortunately. blessings, Roy
Comment from MSJVClarke
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This is a very nice and inspirational poem. I like the musicality of your words as they flowed to make your point. It is a great poem telling of the great beauty we have and should remember each day.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks, for these splendid words and wonderful review, blessings, Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem reminded me of Psalm 23. Not sure why but it did. Once again you did a wonderful job writing this poem and I am glad you chose to share it with us.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks Barbara, for these super words and review, blessings, Roy
Comment from estory
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A great little poem of hope, of that morning light that sweeps away the night. I liked the images, the upbeat tone, the jingling rhyme scheme. It all comes across as very rooted and grounded, like the mountains and the sunlight. It has a kind of determination about it, a faith, that is comforting to hear estory

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks, for sage words and wonderful review, blessings, Roy
Comment from rtobaygo
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Good morning, Roy

Enjoyed the poem and I'm out of sixes. This post was a challenge to understand.

The first two lines --
Yes, even in the darkest night
still shines the brightest star -- shows that God's love is still there, that there is hope.

The last two lines of each stanza presenting man with explanations of what could be.

Am I close?

Take care and stay safe,

Ray
PS: 8/2/2018 Looked at the date -- I didn't realize you're composing poems from the future lol

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the great review, Dear Ray, only the US puts the month and date out of order. Heh heh, blessings, Roy
Comment from mmonaghan777
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The combination of the picture and what was written is incredible. The children and words to define and the definition of hope in your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Thanks, for your wonderful review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy