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Sunset, a Portent

Not everyone wants the day to end.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Sunset, A Portent, is set up correctly and ushers in the elements of darkness which replace sight with wild imagination. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Bill, for using so much of your valuable time to read and comment on what I probably spent less time to slap together. :o)
Comment from Sherman541
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Very nicely written 5/7/5 poem. I think it is very true about the sun setting. I think kids going to bed is also true and some do fear monsters. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Your comments and good wishes are very appreciated, Sherman. Thank you.
reply by Sherman541 on 08-Feb-2018
    you are most welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks someone considers sunset as omen; someone wants to find a day should not end with sunset, children battle with monsters after sunset; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your insight and compliments, Dr. Alcreator.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I didnt have than problem with my children but one of my grand daughters was afraid of them when she went to sleep at night, an unusual write with a chilling message, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Dolly. Glad to chill you!