Stay With Me
double 5-7-566 total reviews
Comment from Ella Gott
This is so so sweet, and I hope you continue to post such sweet gems! I will always be here to read them (I love the scheme by the way). I would be deeply honored if you reviewed my latest work, "In my Blissful World"!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This is so so sweet, and I hope you continue to post such sweet gems! I will always be here to read them (I love the scheme by the way). I would be deeply honored if you reviewed my latest work, "In my Blissful World"!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hi Ella, I will be glad to review it...and thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ben Colder
Not sure if punition will help or not on this type of poetry. The wording is very strong but somehow I seem to run it all together perhaps just me. I need to think about this one.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Not sure if punition will help or not on this type of poetry. The wording is very strong but somehow I seem to run it all together perhaps just me. I need to think about this one.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hi ben, all it is saying...is a woman's embrace may not be as strong as a man...but her embrace comes from her heart...thank you for a great review my friend...love Linda xxoo
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Yep
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from Zue65
I love the way you played up the contrast between men and women and I like the picture that goes with your poem. It is heartwarming and and sensual at the same time. Thanks for sharing another excellent piece.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
I love the way you played up the contrast between men and women and I like the picture that goes with your poem. It is heartwarming and and sensual at the same time. Thanks for sharing another excellent piece.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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HI Susan, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like...so good to see you....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Cycler
Certainly wonderfully heart felt ... from either. I have felt some very strong women hugs and some quite wimpy men's. It's the passion! It's the joy of life. It's the love ... and maybe the desire. Regardless ... lovely duo poem!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Certainly wonderfully heart felt ... from either. I have felt some very strong women hugs and some quite wimpy men's. It's the passion! It's the joy of life. It's the love ... and maybe the desire. Regardless ... lovely duo poem!
~â?¡
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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HI Dave, so good to see you my sweet friend...LOL...I have felt strong hugs...and weaker...but neither held a different value in my heart...it's in passion...you are so right...it's in the love...your a smart man my friend...thank you for a wonderful review you...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from reconciled
Hey Linda....-smile-...
gorgeous description of the regenerating strength found in the arms of love.
I'm terribly sorry for my earlier attempt at humor...its a hit and miss gamble.
with a los vegas load of variables. I'm only Michael
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Hey Linda....-smile-...
gorgeous description of the regenerating strength found in the arms of love.
I'm terribly sorry for my earlier attempt at humor...its a hit and miss gamble.
with a los vegas load of variables. I'm only Michael
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hi Michael, I didn't mean it to come out that men are weak...sorry about the notes...I changed them...I love men...weak or strong...it's what's in the heart...thank you for your lovely six...love you...Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, that's ok...forgiven...I think it is true that a man secures with his arms...and woman more with her heart...sigh...but both with a loving hug...thank you Michael...I love your review...and all your lovely stars...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Really well done capturing that male-female difference and how reassuring and expressive the embrace of a loved one is! The man secures with his arms and the woman secures with her heart. Lovely 5-7-5 suite, Linda!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Really well done capturing that male-female difference and how reassuring and expressive the embrace of a loved one is! The man secures with his arms and the woman secures with her heart. Lovely 5-7-5 suite, Linda!
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hi Helen, you are sooooo right...what a woman is lacking in strength...she makes up with her heart...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo