Time to Snuggle
Cold wind coming through bedroom window5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Time To Snuggle, uses those eleven syllables to suggest that the chill of the wind is enough incentive to seek embracing contact and blanket cover. Yes it is.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This 3-5-3, Time To Snuggle, uses those eleven syllables to suggest that the chill of the wind is enough incentive to seek embracing contact and blanket cover. Yes it is.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
You have captured the imagery perfectly. I wish there were more descriptive terms about the wind, however, (howling? chill? something?) as you rely quite heavily on the graphic to tell your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
You have captured the imagery perfectly. I wish there were more descriptive terms about the wind, however, (howling? chill? something?) as you rely quite heavily on the graphic to tell your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from angel123
Your meaningful poem is well-written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Angel123
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
Your meaningful poem is well-written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Your input is appreciated.
Comment from Debbie Pope
That's a charming poem. Full of warmth despite the cold. The photo is absolutely perfect. Shut that window. I love this little poem. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
That's a charming poem. Full of warmth despite the cold. The photo is absolutely perfect. Shut that window. I love this little poem. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your read and the rating.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem is resonating with me just now because we have high winds in Tenerife and when the wind blows, even the trees need to be tied down! I'm not joking either, they tie the trees up to protect the branches, and yes I am snuggled up! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This poem is resonating with me just now because we have high winds in Tenerife and when the wind blows, even the trees need to be tied down! I'm not joking either, they tie the trees up to protect the branches, and yes I am snuggled up! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Dolly, for the read and the review. Good luck with the storm; happy snuggling.